TPO-37- Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Many people nowadays spend too much money on their pets (dogs, cats, or other animals), although there are better uses for this money.Use specific reasons and example
Nowadays, life style has altered significantly than before. Those are rare families who do not have a pet in their home; actually, they have become a member of a family who has requirements to be satisfies. The question is whether people should spend a great deal of money on them or they should spend it else where. Although I am not in favor of extra money spending, I hold the view that pets are a great creatures we need to spend money for because of there major reasons such as entertainment, supportness and insight. These factors are all well illustrated in next paragraphs.
As a threshold matter, pets are the cutest animals entertaining his lords. Unlike other entertaining stuffs that are virtual or animate, pets are living ones that do interesting actions everybody like. Playing with them is a beneficial activity for people especially children and elders who have more free time to fill. In addition, as most of the pets understand what people tell them, they react surprisingly. For instance, I remember a dog living with a family who brought some ones shoes whenever he was commanded to.
Further more, some people believe that pets are God's creatures looking after which is essential. They are a type of animmals who can not live alone in the nature and needs human support to continue the life. Inspite of some money people should invest on them every month, their presence has effective impacts on spiritual life of people. For instance, there are too many individuals taking care of pets proficiently and provide them with excellent supports to make a comfortable life to these homeless animals. Such a merit action is considered as a charity activity.
Last but not least, what is the most momentous result of taking care of pets is the valued view they gave to the owner. Those families possessing a pet have a more beautiful view toward life's aspects. Observing their growth and behavior, those families are more sensitive to every detail of blessings their God has gifted for them. In other words, pets are domestic animals that are presenting abilities of God. It has been approved by psychologists that interacting with pets has positive impacts on people’s insight toward their life.
To wrap up, spending money on pets has some advantages that are not arising from spending money on other things. Pets influence the quality of our life in different dimensions like amusement, advocating and attitudes. It is recommended for who requires aforementioned items to buy a pet and take care of them properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94847775176 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72020881618 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538641686183 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6190174689 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8695652174 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5652173913 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221047782124 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634046599279 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497740171285 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134602411914 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219504470735 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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