The security of our jobs is a vital part of our lives. My father told me about difficulties that he had in the past and how it has been changed by emerging new facility. Some people believe that security in job is not an important issue, while others disagree. From my point of view, I deeply believe that security is the most important part of our jobs and what it follows I will attempt to address the most discernable reasons.
First, nowadays more job opportunity is available compared to past; Multiplicity of factory needs to have enough employee to do jobs well. For example, a new factory has been established in our region and needs plenty of worker. Since the factory wants to make sure that in a rainy all the employees are available, all of the employee are gathered under unemployment insurance umbrella. Therefore, availability of jobs prepared security for people.
In addition, government make job more secure for people. Accordingly, every employer that take new employee, must insure people for any inevitable event. For instance, one the most important company last year has been demolished and as a result all the workers lose their jobs but since the company was insured, people didn't have any problem with unemployment salary, even though that it was not as much as regular wages. So, this role of government is undeniable to make jobs more secure.
Finally, economic situation has positive influence over security of jobs. Even though in recession period it might not be efficient as well as boom situation but the government can save money for severe period. For instance, the country that I live in "Iran" has multiplicity of resources such as oil, gas, mine and gold; because of that economic growth rate is always positive here. Last year one of the famous company in technology were in the sword of Damocles to bankrupt but the government made 4 billion Rials budget to pour water on the troubled water. nowadays the company is producing its product and they even export them oversees. Imagine this atmosphere in the past, which kind of disaster probably would happen to employees? That story taught me that If the country be in decent economic situation people and companies can take advantage.
All in all, in my estimation, nowadays people have much more secure job compared to the past, despite it may wavering in different regions. Not only job opportunity and economic situation guarantee security of jobs but also government have important role and like unemployment insurance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... rainy all the employees are available, all of the employee are gathered under unemploymen...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...t since the company was insured, people didnt have any problem with unemployment sala...
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Line 7, column 571, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...et to pour water on the troubled water. nowadays the company is producing its product an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01184834123 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72020678318 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521327014218 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3702491169 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0952380952 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52380952381 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.083887824352 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270193828066 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262113225331 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517899930901 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203100816697 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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