TPO 41 Independent writing
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's modern life, thanks to the advanced technoligies and breakhtroughs in every section of science, the way of life has altered dramaticaly. Some people are of the opinion that teachers appreciated adequatly during our time. While, I personaly subscribe to the view that because of the modification on life and also fostering education between various residents teaching is now is a job and does not have ceredit of the old days. In the following paragraphs my reasons will be elaborated in on more detail.
To begin with, I cannot deny the fact that teaching is one of the hardest job in the societies; however, the broad picture of this job chenged these days. generally speaking, educated people was less during the past days, compering with today's life. To delve more into it, we had the romor that say ' teaching is job of profites in the society'. it indicate that past days, how theie react to the teachers and prosess of education. For example, in the past the knowladege was not spread and scatter throughout the world. In hence, a person could be expertes on a variety of majors such as astronomy, pharency, sycholigy, mathematice, to name but a handful. this example illusterated the education situation on the past time, which was rare and scercy on that time; therefore, teachers were elits and adept on that time. The more they were elities, the more the cociety appreciated and valuded them.
Another reasons why I agree with this idea is that improving social media, studentes acsess to the seliant data in the short time. it means that although teachers would do well in their work, they might make a mistake and it is normal in every job. Whereas, on the past time students could not fide the fult simply, nowadays, they can fide the mistakes and errors queiky and as far as I am concerned for youth it would be harder to take the teacher who makes mistakes apprecietly and valud them. For instance, our professor made a mistake on the class and after pasing a year, we mentione it with our classmates and somehowe make fun of him.
Drawing upon the reasosn that I mentioned above, although there are several exceptions excluded from general rule, I believe that teachers are not appreciated as old days. Not only were there differenr societies on that time, which was not many educated people on there, but also students alters and act differenly than the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82281553398 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55849075915 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546116504854 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8028855094 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.388888889 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191896581171 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595742143385 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516971964679 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109894446261 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034650076701 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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