In this rapidly growing technological world people are spending more time at their work than at their homes. There is no shortage of debate regarding factors that affect the job satisfaction of an individual. Generally speaking, I believe that having multiple jobs to finish bring more satisfaction to an individual than similar jobs. I feel this way for several reasons which I explore in following essay.
First, its important to consider that a person can easily lose his focus after spending a considerable amount of time on a partiular work or job. Certainly it's possible for some people to retain concentration for longer duration. But, its not the case with most of the people. My own personal experience is a compelling example for this. During my school also I could only concentrate on a lecture for at most 1 hour. After joining company I could work on a same issue for maximum of 3-4 hours. After that I needed break or some other issue to refresh my mind. If I continue working on same thing for entire day, then my efficieny decreases by half and I feel more stressed. Many of my friends and collegues have the same openion.
Second, its important to consider benifits of having multiple tasks. It improves our multi tasking ability which is one of the important things in this rapidly growing world. One can excel at many things. For example I am working in a team where we fix bugs in operating system. Along with coding and debugging, some times we get escalations and we need to communicate with customer directly. This has helped me to learn to communicate with people and understand their problem. Also, many times we need to travel to different parts of world to adress customer issues and to attend meetings. I enjoy travelling and it helps me to meet new people, get to know their culture and tradition and also to relieve stress. As a result, I am very happy with my job and all these would not have been possible if my task is to sit and code all day long.
Finally, having many different tasks in a day does not necessarily mean one has to abondon a particular work in middle and start new work. I would be the first person to admit that some tasks cannot be resolved in few hours and they need constant effort for longer duration. But, in most of the cases taking break or indulging in some other activity reduces stress. It also helps to see problem from different perspective.
In summary, based on the arguments explored above I am of the openion that its more benificial to work on multiple tasks than to carry out similar task for entire day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...concentration for longer duration. But, its not the case with most of the people. M...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... code all day long. Finally, having many different tasks in a day does not necessarily mea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, as to, for example, i feel, in summary, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65283842795 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55617928837 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521834061135 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1610361869 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9259259259 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.962962963 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154428368656 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396994833937 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488161190221 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10588890119 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526945582032 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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