Ability to plan and organise things is one of the crucial skills that proceed to success. People without an organising skills get lost and lose their goals and in modern life with more complicated life it is more obvious. I definitely agree with the idea presented in the topic and my reasons go as follows.
First of all, modern life is very complex and lots of factors can affect the result. Social media and internet made our life more comfortable but full of distractions. If we could not get ourselves focus on our responsibilities we easily get lost in these modern life distractions. For instance, when we want to do a research for our homework there are always lots of interesting advertisements on the search screen that can touch our curiosity and draw our attention to different subject. We find ourselves hours surfing in the internet and waste our time on non important subject. Therefore, being organized and making plan beforehand is indispensible to avoid distractions.
Moreover, people need to make and set goals to be successful. Studies showed that people with organizing abilities are more successful. They have a good underestanding of their goal and the upcoming problem and make preparation to overcome them and in modern life with more complex life it would be more appealing. For instance, when we want to acheive our goal which is most of the time complex, we have to break it to small steps and try to stick to every step to not losing our hope and energy. This needs plan and assessing beforehand and is time consuming but provides better acheivement and success. Thus, making plans provide the best and fast strategy for our prevailing.
In conclusion, although we can see some people become successful by chance and without too much effort, most of the time success needs making plan and being organized. Not only this skills keep us out of distractions, but also make our path to the goal much easier and understandable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e comfortable but full of distractions. If we could not get ourselves focus on our...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...tions. For instance, when we want to do a research for our homework there are always lots ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rfing in the internet and waste our time on non important subject. Therefore, bei...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...king plan and being organized. Not only this skills keep us out of distractions, but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87387387387 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8173002012 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534534534535 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.677352324 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4705882353 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178634371129 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632436955776 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424073605366 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111936053071 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051753925651 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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