Due to the fast development of our society, our life is becoming more complex than before. In order to keep the pace with this rapidly changed world, young people requires more abilities. And I personally agree with having the ability to plan and organize is important for them. The benefits of being organized are discussed in the following passage.
The first and the foremost reason why I think young people should make a plan is that a plan will make them finish tasks more efficient. Due to the lack of experiences, when young people do some tasks by their first time, they have no idea which task is more important, hence a good plan is necessary for them to analysis the importance of different tasks. Therefore, they can do the important tasks first in order to not trapped in unimportant things.
Furthermore, a good plan can make young people have less probability to make mistakes in their job. As far as I know, when young people begin their new career in a company, most of them will have a mentor for directing them in their work. The ability to make a plan of work will be benefit to young employees, since mentors can check their plan and make sure that young employees is running on the track, so that young employees will have less chance to make mistakes in their work.
Finally, young people can be more competitive in today's job market if they have the ability to plan and organize. In the modern world, our society is changing at a high speed and becoming more complex than the past. Young people with the ability to make plans is more suitable for today's world, since they are always prepared for the change and they know what to do when they find a change is coming than those who did not make a plan. Obviously, bosses will appreciate a team member who is always kept with the change so that this kind of employee will have high chance to get promotion.
In conclusion, the ability to plan and organize is necessary for today's young people. First, they can fulfill their tasks more quick by checking the importance of each task. Also, they will not make too much fault in work since their mentor can check their plans of work. Finally, they can be more competitive in their career because they are kept with today's complicated life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212669683258 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.165158371041 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101809954751 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0633484162896 0.046263068375 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0701357466063 0.0685040099705 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113122171946 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0384615384615 0.0351676179071 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.31874596236 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0339366515837 0.0309702414327 110% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0859728506787 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0339366515837 0.0209618222197 162% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0180995475113 0.0139019557991 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2273.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 405.0 408.028673835 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61234567901 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.266666666667 0.338922669872 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.175308641975 0.251872472559 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.128395061728 0.174417080927 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.079012345679 0.112833075102 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31874596236 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41975308642 0.524397521467 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.4585681203 59.2087087015 75% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0768545141 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.277777778 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 40.0308641975 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.2196969697 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396389643043 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130513132002 0.103427244359 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.070859544599 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.57103641403 0.497263757937 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.117433318713 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179646576568 0.114077575197 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10699554172 0.0781384742642 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.379885304557 0.336927656856 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0274408191128 0.067059652881 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284692381303 0.210909579961 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831014142684 0.0618886996521 134% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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