Obviously, the life is always changing through time and space. Owing to the help of modern technology, we now can do much more complex subjects than ever before. As it goes on such development, the ability to plan and organize must not be rejected by young people to learn.
In school, there are so many courses in a week, how to keep up with these homework, readings and extra subject in school is already a problem that needs to organize a student's schedule to get the purpose. There has been numerous living examples that the results of unorganized life and schedule would doubtfully be successful from the grade these people get and the unfinished tasks they done.
In a construction company, no matter how big or small the project is, it is always essential to have a time plan on when to do the first floor, the molding process, installing hardware and so on. Furthermore, because a construction project is related to huge amount of money, a financial plan to make the profit balanced to the budget we afforded is also important.
In government, each laws and regulations have to be carefully examined and adjusted to make sure that they are well developed to go on execution. There are three stages of the examine process which is being organized and classified that almost every legislation would follow.
In summary, I will definitely agree with the statement of the irreplaceable importance of young people having ability to plan and organize. They should learn it from school and make efforts after they go into the society which have complex tasks waiting for them to accomplish. They have to deal with school works, giant projects and making regulations and all of these cannot be done without plans and organizations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, well, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89189189189 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75217391994 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5883809318 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248201019402 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867517621941 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787206450682 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118831264102 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742730057176 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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