Life is getting harder day after day. With all this complication, it's essential to have the ability by young people to plan and organize. The importance of planning reflects it's effects on all the aspects of life, and certainly makes young people's lifestyle simpler and their goals achievable.
Due to the vast daily achievements of mankind, especially in the technological field, life became much more complicated. For example, internet made the communication between people more complex due to the presence of so many websites, applications, and most importantly social media like facebook and twitter. So if young people does not plan their time and their lifestyle, then they would waste so much of their times in front of a screen, missing moments and priorities.
Moreover, planning make duties and goals more easier to accomplish. If a person have a plan, then he would be aware of all the steps that would make him reach the top. The presence of an organized outline in any assignment makes it more probable for success. For example, if I aim at passing an exam, then putting a strategy is a must. Step by step I can reach my goal. However, if I randomly study from here and there without any organization, it would be much harder, if not impossible, to reach the peak within a same time frame.
Also, from another perspective, planning is essential in our modern life due to the fact that the complexity of life throws enormous responsibilities on young people, especially adolescents. And since they have almost zero experience, then following a certain path would be much harder if not organized and planned smartly.
As a conclusion, being able to make a neat plan in life is the key factor of success. So organizing our selves, knowing our priorities and working smart can lead to a more efficient generation, and thus to a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...oreover, planning make duties and goals more easier to accomplish. If a person have a plan,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9746031746 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90165329368 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55873015873 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3695087323 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9375 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199060683598 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676955469486 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762972212627 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117201477509 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735868706193 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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