It is an indisputable fact that our contemporary society is constantly changing at fast pace since the information technology revolutionized our life. For that, people have always been striving to equip themselves with the essential skills that would help them to thrive and succeed. Recently, one of the most debatable issue related to this topic is that weather or not people should plan and organize because of the complex life. Some people believe that planning and organization are not necessary skills. As far as I am concerned, I firmly believe that planning and organization are indispensable skills in our life. In what follow, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that planning with good organization make it possible for complicated and challenging tasks to get done. As a matter of fact, the world has become too complicated for those who lack these skills. In order to survive in this complex world, people should plan their goals and implement them with good organization. To illustrate this, plans are like road maps to show one his/her destination, plans can help us to know how far we have become and how much left to do. As Abraham Lincoln once said" if I have 60 minutes to cut down a tree, I will spend 40 minutes to sharp the ax and 20 minutes to cut it down. Plans are just like"sharpening the ax" which can facilitate the hard task. for example, preparing for the wedding party can be extremely challenging. To make my 'big day'" outstanding one ,I made a plan of what to-do list. I put the essential things on the top of the list. Confirming the hotel reservation, purchasing the wedding dress, packing for the honeymoon were the primary things that I should do. Having the plan make it easier for me to get control of everything I need to do. This example clearly illustrates that plans with organisation can make anything possible to do no matter how hard it is.
Another equally significant point is that planning and organisation help us to achieve our goals with less stress. It goes without saying that when we have exams we feel extremly nervous. According to recent study revealed that students who stick to study plan are less stressful and more likely to perform better than those without plan. Cracking under the strain is unavoidable when it comes to preparing for our goals. Plans will help us to control our stress to prepare for something we want. My sister is a compelling example of that. My sister is very organised person. She always make plans a head of time . During all her study years was committed to her study by going step by step with the plan. She was able to finish her study in a short period of time with high productivity. As a result, she always have plenty of time to relax and unwind. As opposed to me I spend more time than her in my study and i feel so exhausted and overwhelmed. This was because the lacking to plan and organize my life like her. This show us that having a plan help us to accomplish more with less stress.
In conclusion, if we contemplate the mentioned reasons, we will soon realize that the essence why having plans matter.Planning and organization not only hep us to achieve complex task,but also to make our goals less stressful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2722.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 573.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75043630017 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77933922641 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48167539267 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 838.8 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5399174083 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4848484848 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84848484848 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234249164205 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633285941749 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376785810137 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148493114966 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416293195937 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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