There are certain considerations or factors that everyone can take into account to investigate and examine necessary abilities for young people. I certainly agree that the new life is very complicated and it is necessary for the youngsters to plan and organize. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanation is going to be as follow.
Firstly, Take a look around yourself, what do you see? Reverse back for about twenty years, can you compare now the change that occurs at the last few years.This is the speed era and the time of technology. The new modern world makes an enormous progress and become very complicated. So, the governments should encourage the youngsters to learn how to create and let them participate in the real life in order to make a new powerful generation able to face the difficulties of the future. For instance, my college decided to make a summer program and named it (The Creation of Youngsters). In that program, the management lent every student a laptop and dictates them to design electronic service application like shopping online applications and the government guaranteed to pay salaries for the students as acknowledgements of their efforts.
Furthermore, it is noticeable that big number of researches and discoveries were done by young scientists as they have much ability to think, try and discover or their brain are still fresh. In order to such reason, the ministry of Scientific Research was decided to build a scientific academy and named it (The Star of Science). The ministry provided the academy by the most advanced instruments and scientific devices and built many laboratories for scientific researches and engineering. The academy accepted large number of students after passing a definite exam and let them search and invent. At the end of semester every student made a presentation and introduced what they were getting. We saw refrigerator worked by ice, motorbike worked by the energy of the sun and many incredible discoveries.
Lastly, the recent life is much cost and many people couldn’t be able to earn sufficient money required for having the essential objects needed for comfortable life. So, the youngsters should be worked in order to buy their food, clothes and pay their bills. Surely, work will teach them the responsibility and duties respect.
Due to the aforementioned ground, all folk should bear in mind that it is more profitable for the community to equip with youngsters creation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...ch side. The explanation is going to be as follow. Firstly, Take a look around yourself,...
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Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...hange that occurs at the last few years.This is the speed era and the time of techno...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...sts as they have much ability to think, try and discover or their brain are still fresh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, look, so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10268948655 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95338533222 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574572127139 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3039398169 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.35 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177925274819 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468381232938 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577257602713 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928751780925 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484930303404 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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