There is no shortage of debate about the importance of friendship in our life. In general, people are social and they want to love and to be loved by others. Friendship is a way to let us feel that way. I believe in the statement says the friend in need is the friend indeed. I agree to keep my friendship relationships with few people can make me happier rather than just making new friends.i have my own reason and supporting examples which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, In my opinion, the happiness comes from having friends depends on the quality of the friends we have rather than the number of friends are on our list. Friend means to me a lot like a mirror image to me. We have almost same interests, hobbies. This enables us to enjoy our time peacefully full fo fun without quarrel. In addition to that, we have enough time to spend together during the ups and downs. As I mentioned above the friend in need is the friend indeed. Life is full Pleasure and events that bring us happiness on the others hand also, full of troubles and hardships. That means our friends should have enough time to spend with whenever need them. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I get used to having a huge number of friends who are always I remember them and share them all their difficulties besides their pleasure time. But, something happened to me made me changed the way I see them not as friends but just acquaintances. One day I fell sick and the doctors told that I have to do an operation. And, I need someone beside me to take care of me after the procedures will be done. I posted that on my facebook page in order to find some can do this mission for as I live far away from my family. I found only one of those who I called them friends responded to me. To be honest, I couldn't believe what he accomplishes with me, he dedicated his time and his effort to me.I, rejoiced to have such friend.
To sum up, It's wonderful to have a few friends in our life, they can bring to our happiness and pleasure. It's easy to communicate them and care one another.
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- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pend together during the ups and downs. As I mentioned above the friend in need is...
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Suggestion:
...old that I have to do an operation. And, I need someone beside me to take care of...
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...riends responded to me. To be honest, I couldnt believe what he accomplishes with me, h...
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...dedicated his time and his effort to me.I, rejoiced to have such friend. To s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, in addition, in general, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34693877551 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45131160227 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520408163265 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0002362942 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0869565217 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0434782609 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164694381814 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460792686413 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418909291007 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115874985783 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668167158203 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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