TPO 50
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
"The past is the light for the future." This is a famous quotation among history teachers in my country which represent briefly what I want to illustrate in this essay.
At the high school and also in universities, courses such as history are being less respected or paid attention because students consider history course the most tedious coursework in their entire education. But, regardless of this neglection, I believe that this course should be compulsory in the educational schedule. The history is actually the social and group memory in every country and in the entire world. The history of societies comprises overcomings and failures, feelings of happiness and sadnesses and all political, cultural and social events which are responsible for the formation of the culture and social system in that country. However, the question is posed by lots of students that why an elite and erudite individual should take courses about history? In short, the answer is that we should study history because we should recall what hardships were passed in the country and we should learn from the mistakes that the whole society committed in the past. Let me explain with a specific example. The current situation and history of My country Afghanistan is full of tragic occurrences which are responsible for many troubles and problems now the society is facing. The most unfortunate tragic event was murdering the 62 percent of a specific tribe by a queen who belonged to another tribe that they thought they are superior to the other tribes. Another example is the civil war in Afghanistan after the Soviet Union collapsed. Almost all tribes were involved in a disastrous war which had no result for the people except disaster, migration and humanitarian tragedies. So, if the students and elites in Afghanistan society are not willing to experience the disastrous events which have occurred just a few decades ago, they should be required to take a course about their history. By studying the history of the disasters, they will try to avoid the struggles that resulted in previous experiences.
All in all, the study of the history is essential for every member of every society because they can prevent tragic events and are able to make a better future for their kids and for all members of society as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, briefly, but, however, if, so, well, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03116883117 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67835662263 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522077922078 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3640878388 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.133333333 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218492610684 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714686466962 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438093895273 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117056585789 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799090463697 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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