TPO 58
With the development of people’s living standard, quite a large number of people are facing a hot topic whether spending time alone is the best way to totally relax. Compared with enjoying ourselves alone, other forms of relaxation definitely play a key role in our daily life. From my perspective, spending time with families, traveling with friends and even actively participate in social activities are more likely to create values in easy life.
When it comes to getting together with families, not surprisingly, it is an effective way for us to release the pressure. It is quite easy for us to start a topic with our families both about things that make us happy and about troubles that lead to depression. That is to say, sharing happiness with families enables us to win double happiness. After they feel the happy moment, it is common that they will recall their cheerful things in their life or in the workplace and share with us. In addition, not only will communicating with families bring us the happy moment, but just watching television with them or having meals together undeniably makes us leave the unpleasant things behind, thus relieving the stress.
Moreover, despite the way to stay with families, traveling with friends is conductive to relaxing. Friends, obviously, bring us a lot of happiness because we are familiar with each other and know what we like and what we are worried about. Traveling with friends can get away from the daily grind and appreciate the beautiful scenery and capture the memorable moment with the camera, which ultimately enables us to immerse in the pleasant mood. Evidence suggests that the more time we stay with friends, the more happiness we will obtain because peers have the common topic or always like to share the latest information. Thus, this can enrich our daily life and making us be in the state of satisfaction.
Finally, one radical proposal to relax is to take part in social activities. If we always join some outdoor or indoor activities, we can not only enjoy the process of meeting new friends, but also can enjoy the relaxing and pleasant atmosphere for communication and exchange. At the same time, there is no doubt that activities or parties apparently involve so many special designed games that players eventually enjoy great pleasure and satisfaction from these games.
Nevertheless, spending time alone means that no one can have a cause communication with and even no friends around to play together. If facing obstacles and suffering from stress, hardly do we confide annoyance with others or finding out fun activities to relieve the stress.In conclusion, although sometimes to keep ourselves alone may enjoy a piece of peace, I actually maintain that having time with families, friends and even strangers in parties actually contributes to relaxing.
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- TPO 47 85
- TPO 58 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily Use specific reasons and ex 70
- TPO 63 85
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily Use specific reasons and ex 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ment of people’s living standard, quite a large number of people are facing a hot topic whether s...
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Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'communicate'
Suggestion: communicate
...are with us. In addition, not only will communicating with families bring us the happy moment...
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Line 9, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ut fun activities to relieve the stress.In conclusion, although sometimes to keep ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, finally, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2377.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06823027719 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69147519326 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520255863539 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 747.0 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2266434464 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.055555556 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0555555556 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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