TPO 58-Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child (5-10 years old)? 1.being helpful 2. Being honest 3. Being well organized.
Children need to learn many aspect of life in their childhood. In my opinion, being helpful is a significant value that one can share with a young child because of two reasons which will be discussed in the following essay.
To begin with, being helpful help children to develop their communication skills. To fully understand the content, children should learn people skill to able to contact with their peers. If they help and communicate with others, they will grow their mental health as early as childhood in order to guarantee their success in the future. For instance, suppose two children that play in the playground. One of them fell down of skating rink. Then, his friend tries to help him by speak, and makes a friendly conversation to his friend forget minor injury. Therefore, this talk between them not only help to reduce the pain of injury but also is an excellent practice for communicational skill.
Furthermore, being helpful help them to cope with their problems. Indeed, they try many ways to solve their peer's problems, so they can improve their personal abilities, such as analysis skills and thinking logical. In fact, they will deeply understand how they can address their problems in their future lives. My cousin's experience is a compelling example of this. I am reminded of the year he was in elementary school. His mother deiced to focus on his training that he will be well- organized person. Also, he has really discipline now, but he cannot solve his problem lonely. In fact, all the time, he need to advice with others instead of his own. Although, he graduated from mechanical department as an excellent student, he could not find suitable job.
To summarize, I firmly believe that it is better for children to share being helpful with them. This is because they can connect with their friends and others. Moreover, they learn how they can deal with their problems.
- TPO 55 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- TPO 56 Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social networking sites Other people prefer not to create such records Which approach do you prefer and why Use specific reasons and examples 70
- TPO 58 Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child 5 10 years old 1 being helpful 2 Being honest 3 Being well organized 61
- TPO 56 Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social networking sites Other people prefer not to create such records Which approach do you prefer and why Use specific reasons and examples 3
- TPO 55 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
Children need to learn many aspect of life in their childhood. In my opini...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...tand the content, children should learn people skill to able to contact with their pee...
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Line 5, column 526, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'disciplined'.
Suggestion: disciplined
...- organized person. Also, he has really discipline now, but he cannot solve his problem lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91640866873 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53385477434 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575851393189 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4415769416 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.619047619 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212117517252 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721320412379 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10850166693 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17463750049 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102262927252 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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