TPO- test2- tell the truth is good or not

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TPO- test2- tell the truth is good or not

he traditional virtue of telling the truth in all situations is increasingly doubted by man yin
today’s world.many believe that telling the truth is not always the best policy when dealing with
people. moreover, the line of a “truth” is becoming more and more vague. this essay will explore
the importance of telling the truth in relationships between people.
we all understand that often the truth is offending and may not be a very nice thing to both hear or
say. lies or white lies often have their advantages. the manipulation of white lies is the most
obvious the business world. how many times have we heard that some product is “the finest” or
“the cheapest”? how many times have we heard that products have such and such “magical
functions”? advertising is about persuasion, and many would agree that if a company is to tell the
absolute truth about it’s products, no one would be interested in even having a look at the
products.
the same logic applies to human relationships. if your friend had worn a newly purchased dress
on her birth day and energetically asked you if it was a worthy buy, would you free lye xpress your
opinion that you had never seen a dress as the one she’s current lywearing?and spoil her
birthday? unarguably, hiding(entirely or particially) the truth in some situations can be quite
handy indeed. confrontations and disputes can seemingly be avoided.
however, there is always the risk factor of the truth emerging sooner or later when telling an
untruth. the basic trust in any relationships(businessman/customer, friends, parents/children) will
be blotched, and would have an impact on the future relationship between both parties. the story
of the “the boy who cried wolf” fully illustrates the consequenes of telling untruths. no one will
believe you when you’re telling the truth. your word will have no weighting.
in addition, another “bad factor” of telling untruths is that you have absolutely no control over
when the truth(of previous untruths) will emerge. untruths breed pain in both parties: tears when
the truth is uncovered after a period of time; fear and the burden of sharing a “secret”. in the long
run, it seems that hiding the truth is not beneficial to either party.
everyone hates betrayal. even if it is the trend to occasionally hide the truth in relationships, it is
strongly recommended that not to follow that trend as the risk and the consequences of the truth
unfolded overwhelms the minimal advantages one can derive from not telling the truth. after all, it
is understood that relationships are founded on “trust” which goes hand in hand with “truth”.
indeed telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
always.

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...st' or 'the cheapest'? how many times have we heard that products ...
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...he truth in some situations can be quite handy indeed. confrontations and dispute...
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...n in any relationship between people. always.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, moreover, so, after all, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2432.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49543518 2.67179642975 131% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521929824561 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0469078098 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.28 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.24 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.53405017921 640% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 52.0 5.5376344086 939% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181879606774 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655805257079 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685957139615 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685928131541 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638263289483 0.0645574589148 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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