TPO27: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' job than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
job security is a momentous matter for human being. Pressure of unemployment is a severe mental engagement which leads to a poor lifestyle without any happiness. Some people believes that it is worthwhile to take a secure job rather than waiting for an occupation according to our eagerness which makes us contented. personally I confirm this idea and I think that job security is an essential criteria for an occupation. I will substantiate my standpoint in the following paragraphs.
The first thing coming to mind to elucidate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that everything changes in a swift rate and people should keep in pace with this high rate of progress. As a result, the human kind mistakes will be increased in their positions such as job or even their common life because they should make decision rapidly. Theses possible errors have drastic consequences in our occupation thus, if we have a more secure job, we could be ensure about or plans because the possibility of firing is very minor. In order to shed light on this issue I will a personal experience. my colleague was an organized person and he planned for affording a house and a car in two years but he erred in a task and our company underwent a moderate loss. he was fired because his job was not secure. however, he liked his job very much but he is not a satisfied person now. As you can see, satisfaction is not suitable criteria.
The second reason behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that economical aspect of life is more momentous for people. they are looking for well-paid occupations and they take into account other facets like satisfaction rarely. For instance, I found my dream job two years ago. it was completely related to my scientific field but my wage was not enough and acceptable for a moderate life. I resigned that job and took a job which is not based on my passion however, it has a better income for me and it was more secure as well.
In brief, I should claim that security is a noticeable criteria for choosing a job nowadays because not only people will not be in danger of firing but also they could plan their life and earn more money as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, in brief, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62015503876 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65777316331 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527131782946 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3217540393 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1052631579 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226358698639 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753060599513 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058841783259 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146252269815 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00485619770029 0.0645574589148 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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