TPO34-Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on a cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent years, the whole world has been changing enormously at the speed of light with the advent of new ideas and concepts. therefore, teaching methods are changing rapidly and is relied heavily on new technology achievements like using the internet and cell phone. also, when it comes to my position, by weighing up the pros and cons, I strongly believe that the harm of advanced technologies is undeniable but these are highly conducive to learning easily for some reasons. Which I will explore in the following.
First and foremost, the main reason why I hold this idea is that thanks to modernization, the information is readily accessible on the internet for everyone which paves the way for children to become successful in their lessons. while previously they just had access to a little source, on the other hand being educated was cumbersome for them.
In addition, it is a real fact that smart cellphones provide us with a lot of practical applications for learning and improving some skills. A simple example which will suffice to illustrate my viewpoint is that, as experts say, a kitchen knife is useful but people are responsible how to use it for cutting fruit or killing someone so it must not be forbidden to use because of a few bitter accidents. Thus, we cannot deny the advantages of smartphones by reason of wasting time.
Last but not least, another tangible benefit of modern technology in educating children is that they are able to make friends with some persons who live in another country through social media in other to learn new languages and get familiar with their customs and tradition. For instance, for several years I studied English really hard but unfortunately, I could not speak English as well, my teacher suggested joining a group of foreign students on Facebook which was really beneficial. This had helped me not only to improve my speaking but also to understand their cultures.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, I absolutely disagree with this statement. I think that in spite of the difficulties we have faced in breeding kids, we should see the glass as half-full.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...h the advent of new ideas and concepts. therefore, teaching methods are changing rapidly ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...like using the internet and cell phone. also, when it comes to my position, by weigh...
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Line 1, column 481, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve to learning easily for some reasons. Which I will explore in the following. Firs...
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Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... to become successful in their lessons. while previously they just had access to a li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97222222222 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80934150494 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3305968775 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113355829417 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364443730948 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322040599539 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579267998069 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133387920211 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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