Tpo51
The article introduces the topic of human's interests in elephants as the largest animal in today's world. More specifically, the writer discusses that they show several surprising behaviors. The lecturer in the listening passage disagrees. He thinks that these beliefs are based on misunderstandings of elephants actions and attacks each of the claims made in the reading.
in the reading, the author begins by stating that elephants can sense that their deaths are imminent, so they leave their herds and go lonely wherever is close to the water. The lecturer, however, disagrees. He states that it is not correct to assume that because, when they get old and weak, their teeth become useless and as a result of that they try to find soft vegetation which is usually found near the water and eventually die there.
The author also claims that elephants have artistic talent, some of them could paint drawing by using their trunks. Again, the speaker believes that there are flaws in the writer's argument, the lecturer holds that their ears are really sensitive. Thus, their trainers teach them how to draw and move paintbrush by touching their ears. Finally, these patterns are not alike flowers and animals these are just some lines.
Another reason why the author feels that some elephant's behavior are astonishing is that they have huge bodies but they are deeply afraid to face mice. The professor in the listening passage is doubtful that is accurate. He suggests that the reaction of elephants to mice was misinterpreted. Owing to lack of well-known mice cause them to react in this way which is based on a natural instinct. On the other hand, some of the elephants that live in the area near mice as zoos get familiar with them and do not respond with fear of the mice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...h of the claims made in the reading. in the reading, the author begins by stati...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...er believes that there are flaws in the writers argument, the lecturer holds that their...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elephants'' or 'elephant's'?
Suggestion: elephants'; elephant's
...r reason why the author feels that some elephants behavior are astonishing is that they h...
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Line 7, column 416, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... a natural instinct. On the other hand, some of the elephants that live in the area near mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, really, so, thus, well, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 303.0 270.72406181 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89768976898 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49594427527 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.596392613 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06452816374 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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