TPo48
Nowadays, young people are surrounded with numerous tasks which stem from their several hope that they have. Young people desire to gain a lot of attainment during their life and try to find the efficient way to attain them earlier and easier. Some people find such ability to plan as a critical way and some present other features to overcome to complex life. When it comes to me, I find myself with the former group and I vindicate my perspective in ensuing paragraphs.
Frist thing that comes in mind is that ability to plan and organize cause people to benefit from their time efficiently and effectively. So clear is the claim that it is needless to more explanations that modern life creates the several various duties and tasks. Most of the people have confronted with limitation of time to accomplish all. Therefore, when someone is capable to plan, subsequently they can manage tasks on time and do not lose time because of confuse to how to carry out all them. Hence, this kind of ability leads young people can accomplish more tasks with better quality compare with someone who has not ability to plan. As a result they pass their way rapidly and easily and they can gain more achievements and become successful person.
Second thing that supports my idea is that young people who can organize has a low stress level. All intently experience, when we are certain that can finish our duties we are calm and relax compare with we know that our works will not finish on time. The less stress level we have, the more functionality we obtain. As a result, we can assert that ability to plan cause so much success. Moreover, noteworthy research demonstrated that high stress level leads people to become sick and their heart become weak gradually. Hence, these kind of people are more healthy than people suffer from confusing which task should be done at first and experience more stress. For example, 2 years ago, I obliged to study and coincide with worked part time, but I could not manage my time to do my assignments on time. I visited my consoler, and she wrote a plan for me and I did them step by step. After two months I notices that not only do I assignment on time and mu functionality increase, but also I have extra time to meet my friends.
All in all, young people who are capable to manage their tasks and time have more functionality because they have mental and physical health and can present their task in the better way.
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- TPo48 3
- integrated 46 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hope seems to be countable; consider using: 'several hopes'.
Suggestion: several hopes
...th numerous tasks which stem from their several hope that they have. Young people desire to ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my perspective in ensuing paragraphs. Frist thing that comes in mind is that a...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vements and become successful person. Second thing that supports my idea is th...
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Line 5, column 531, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...eir heart become weak gradually. Hence, these kind of people are more healthy than people ...
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Line 5, column 736, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...liged to study and coincide with worked part time, but I could not manage my time to do m...
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Line 5, column 907, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'notice'
Suggestion: notice
...d them step by step. After two months I notices that not only do I assignment on time a...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have mental and physical health and can present their task in the better way. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64827586207 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4137602625 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491954022989 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1417725892 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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