Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and ex
Hardly would one doubt about significant role of friends in modern life. Most of the people are far from their families and relatives and spend time with their friends and rely on friendship. Nowadays, people have different approach about friends and friendships. Some believe that having more number of friends lead that they have more alternative to make happy time and other look at this matter on the other way and hold the view that stability on the friendship is more important and people with the old friends are so much happy. When it comes to me, I find myself with latter group and I will vindicate my perspective in the ensuing paragraphs.
First reason that comes to mind is that old friends have more mutual interest with each other. So clear is the fact that extra explanations is needless that people stay with someone who have less conflicting and think as similar as them. Therefore, close friends have the close approach or in a long term their idea and view become similar. When people have analogous idea they become happy with the similar things and they carry out their fun plans together because their plans are not opposed with each other and both benefit. For example, I and my old friend are in love to travel. When I say her are you ready? She says yes without any reluctantly. Moreover we travel as a same way, both of us like hitchhiking and travel cheap.
Second reason that supports my idea is that old friends are familiar with friend's behavior and their character. Old friends are aware of whom to react to their friends when they are sad or happy, so they are capable that how to happy them. In addition, People who stay with each other for long time feel responsible for each other. Therefore, they know that there is someone who supports them in the every condition. For example, my old friends know that I love Hickok’s films. Hence, when she feels that I need some rest, she surprises me by one of his film and after that provides a condition to conversation.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and ex 60
- integrated 46 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rspective in the ensuing paragraphs. First reason that comes to mind is that ...
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Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[1]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'tell'?
Suggestion: tell
...ld friend are in love to travel. When I say her are you ready? She says yes without...
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Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...? She says yes without any reluctantly. Moreover we travel as a same way, both of us lik...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...us like hitchhiking and travel cheap. Second reason that supports my idea is t...
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Line 5, column 620, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t provides a condition to conversation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66197183099 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37126218465 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498591549296 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8370373702 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1052631579 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22540899692 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710705106838 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567104199239 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170960632545 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392112332864 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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