Tpo51- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Tpo51- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by MinaSh on Mon, 11/25/2019 - 04:23

some people believe that, movies and television have a negative effect on young people, so they do not let children watch them. Others, make opposite points, and they encourage their children to watch movies. I firmly assert the second point carries high weight, and I use following reasons to support my position.

For the beginning, every day, a lot of effective movies and programs are broadcast on television. Most of them have beneficial content, specially for young people. In addition, programs have a separate subject, so young people can choose their favorite ones. Channels which have content of sport, chef, document, policy, religion, art and so on can affect us, and I think we can improve our knowledge and abilities and see a new point of view by watching them. Besides, political programs can help young children to know about current circumstance in their country, their president, industrial situation and something like it. so, in the time of poll, they can vote for having the better future.

For instance, when I was a teenager, every day I watched a sport game on television. After a month, I encouraged to enroll a sport class. I am a good coach now, and I have won some competitions since I enrolled.

Additionally, every night a funny serial is shown on television. since, nearly all people are too busy today, and they spend more time outside the home, this serial can help them to get energy, and become happy. Actually, the member of family can get together, sit in front of the television, eat junk food, and have fun by watching funny movies or programs which are shown on television.

As a result, programs which are shown on television are too useful for young people, and I think some rich movies should show in schools to affect them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, second, so, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94407894737 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59145187798 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4883675105 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9375 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154154016531 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525453472235 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058686893163 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861237204316 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613822797634 0.0645574589148 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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