tpo18.INTEGRATED
The reading passage satates that torreya taifoha which is common in the part of florida will be extinct as soon as possible, and scientists want to revival them. they consider three ways to protect this kinds of tree. However, the professor in the lecture rejects the points that made in the reading.
First, considering the reading, scientists belive that the cool and damp areas are good for torreya, and if they plant in this aread, they will be able to survive, so they are planting torreya seeds in this condition microclimate. In contrast, the professor in the lecture refuses the idea and further explans that, this plan does not work because of two reasons. First of all, this condition micro climate is affected by changing the climate in large areas. Actually, global warmin, causes increas overall tempreture and wetlands in florida have been rainted recentlly. Also, some resions acros the florida are becoming dry, so torreya does not have a chance to survive.
Second, the reading claims that, if torreyas plant in new location which fars from florida, they will be able to survive. on the contrary, the professor in the lecture rejects this idea and talks about one type of tree that relocated in the past. When it moved to a new location, it spreaded very quikly and other trees were killed, and they were becoming extinct.
Third, the author in the reading passage mentions that scientists can protect torreya in reaserch centers. On the other hand, the professor in the lecture mentions that because of population of torreya, they can not be able to resist deases in the reserach center because there is not enough capacity to keep torreya, and they can not survive for a long term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...e, and scientists want to revival them. they consider three ways to protect this kin...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...em. they consider three ways to protect this kinds of tree. However, the professor i...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fuses the idea and further explans that, this plan does not work because of two r...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... florida, they will be able to survive. on the contrary, the professor in the lect...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ientists can protect torreya in reaserch centers. On the other hand, the professo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, second, so, third, in contrast, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 290.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35614913861 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527586206897 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4604869847 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374966106869 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128725392994 0.0996497079465 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995461714859 0.0662205650399 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237146496706 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324755430224 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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