TV advertisements
Nowadays, advertisement is been a vigorous method for manufacturers to sell their products easily. But there is a controversial argument. what is the influence of tv advertising that is led towards young children on them? Most of the people point out it is not a good idea that young children are aimed at television(TV) advertisements, and others oppose this statement. Personally, I think that this kind of advertising should be prohibited. I feel this way for two reasons which I substituate in the following essay.
At the first place, children of these ages are so imitating. They do anything that they see on TV, and they want anything new what they watch on TV advertisements. This is not acceptable for children that they have not the thing, while one of them has it in the advertisement they watch. My son's case is a compelling example of this. He is four years old. He is used to watching TV with us every evening. Can be said, every day we have a struggle due to advertisements are showed among the TV programs. He wants everything that showed in the advertisements in which children are present and have a role in them.
Secondly. Most of the TV advertising is deceptive for children at these ages. The producers of advertisements are able to give such charm and attractivity to an invaluable product in advertising that can persuade children to have one of that product. Since children in these ages have not the ability to recognizing good from bad, they are attracted by them. For instance, a tv advertising that I recently watched was an Ad in which two children had a role in it, and a product they advertise was just a pen had a little different shape from normal pens. It was showed in some way that it has particular features.
In conclusion. I strongly believe that any tv advertising in which young children is their purpose should be baned. This is because children tend to experience anything they see on TV advertising, and the way one product in these advertisements showed is just an exaggeration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77337110482 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0634430449 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478753541076 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6833229819 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2380952381 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399773734098 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126922572479 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123867970206 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297068825493 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369017749115 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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