Undoubtedly, people lifestyles have changed over time. Some people consider that modern life is more complex than before. Therefore, I personally believe that the organization is one of the most efficient aspects that people should consider for overcoming some inconvenient with their schedule. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, due to the lack of access to public universities, most young people have to study and work at the same time which involves that they have an overcharged schedule. In order to take advantage of each activity that they develop, they should possess the ability to plan and organize their academic and work duties properly. This technique may provide people with more options to complete even more activities during the day. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was studying at university in Guayaquil, I had to work part-time in order to pay services such as food, transportation, and laundry during years I spent there. In the beginning, it was complicated for me to accomplish to organize my time. Sometimes I got late to class or to work, even there were some days where I missed class because I considered that it was much more work than I could do. However, this reality changed when my father gave me the advice to organize my time according to my priorities and preferences. This suggestion consists in developing first the activities which were more important or necessary and then the rest of duties. Having organized better my time, I could to enhance my performance not only in class but also in my job. This method of organization does not only allow to develop more activities but also to do them effectively.
Secondly, another benefit of planning a schedule previously is that it provides people with an extra time to relax of overworking hours. Because most of the young people have to work and study simultaneously, their performance over time begins to decrease which includes some consequences in long-term such as the hiring of their jobs or health problems. To prevent it happens, the free time people should spend on entertainment. For instance, my cousin who is at university and also help in his father’s company have a lot of complex duties to do per day. The first year of the university his performance was questioned by some professor who advised him to just focus on just one activity either to study or work but not both. However, his psychology professor was the only one who advised to just organize his time and use some of this time to relax. One of the activities that he did every day was to play games at night. Having incorporated this activity in his schedule, he could improve his participation in both activities.
In conclusion, for all the reasons that I mentioned above, I strongly consider that the ability to plan and organize should be presented in all people who need to enhance their performance.
Undoubtedly, people lifestyles have changed over time. Some people consider that modern life is more complex than before. Therefore, I personally believe that the organization is one of the most efficient aspects that people should consider for overcoming some inconvenient with their schedule. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, due to the lack of access to public universities, most young people have to study and work at the same time which involves that they have an overcharged schedule. In order to take advantage of each activity that they develop, they should possess the ability to plan and organize their academic and work duties properly. This technique may provide people with more options to complete even more activities during the day. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was studying at university in Guayaquil, I had to work part-time in order to pay services such as food, transportation, and laundry during years I spent there. In the beginning, it was complicated for me to accomplish to organize my time. Sometimes I got late to class or to work, even there were some days where I missed class because I considered that it was much more work than I could do. However, this reality changed when my father gave me the advice to organize my time according to my priorities and preferences. This suggestion consists in developing first the activities which were more important or necessary and then the rest of duties. Having organized better my time, I could to enhance my performance not only in class but also in my job. This method of organization does not only allow to develop more activities but also to do them effectively.
Secondly, another benefit of planning a schedule previously is that it provides people with an extra time to relax of overworking hours. Because most of the young people have to work and study simultaneously, their performance over time begins to decrease which includes some consequences in long-term such as the hiring of their jobs or health problems. To prevent it happens, the free time people should spend on entertainment. For instance, my cousin who is at university and also help in his father’s company have a lot of complex duties to do per day. The first year of the university his performance was questioned by some professor who advised him to just focus on just one activity either to study or work but not both. However, his psychology professor was the only one who advised to just organize his time and use some of this time to relax. One of the activities that he did every day was to play games at night. Having incorporated this activity in his schedule, he could improve his participation in both activities.
In conclusion, for all the reasons that I mentioned above, I strongly consider that the ability to plan and organize should be presented in all people who need to enhance their performance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 903, Rule ID: DID_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...of the activities that he did every day was to play games at night. Having incorpor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2459.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86930693069 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84230232067 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471287128713 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 805.5 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9093995358 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.458333333 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0416666667 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394759214574 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127062016085 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151058531334 0.0737576698707 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318841363054 0.150856017488 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.250399261655 0.0645574589148 388% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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