In the world, many countries have different ways in improving their economy. Some few countries direct business research and other countries direct research in agriculture. My country improves in using business until now. In my opinion, I want a center of business research than a center for research in agriculture. I have two reasons which I explore in this essay.
To begin with, our country has used this method for so long. For example, my country has imprive the economy because of business. As a result, my country is better than before. If we research in agriculture until now, we cannot be recognized and we cannot be an advanced country.
Secondly, we can export better than food. My country’s typical industries are semiconductor, shipbuilding industry and so forth. These products, we can export in other countries. For example, food is almost the same as other countries' food so if they have large territory and can farm, that place they can get more capital. However, technology is limited so only few countries can produce the products.
In conclusion, my opinion is that research business is good for my country. According my two reasons first my country used this way in the past and until now. Then, we develop more and more. Second we can export our specialty hence we can improve our country’s fame.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9865470852 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73304314356 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 212.727598566 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520179372197 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5711251429 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.7777777778 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3888888889 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286857580644 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985445093703 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119116470172 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194149496107 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133971932175 0.0645574589148 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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