What are your goals for the future?
Future could hold many different things for people. For me, a bright tomorrow is where I have achieved what I want from life. I have set many different objectives for my upcoming years, two most important ones are getting a Phd degree in biology and traveling around the world in the future.
My first and the most important goal is getting a phd in cellular biology- tissue culture. I have two reasons for wanting to persue a phd and in particular this epecific field of study. First, my lifelong dream has always been finding a treatment for cancer. This has always been my passion. Second, one must pay the bills. According to my research, in subjects such as biology, having a phd increases employment chances. Therefore, in order to have higher chances of finding a decent job that agrees with my love for science, I need to get higher education.
My other goal, though it might sound simple and not important, is travelling around the globe. I have a made a list of 10 different countries with different contexts to visit as soon as possible. I want to see different cultures and people, experience new things, and get to know new ideas. In addition, getting in touch with new people and knowing other beliefs and traditions can broaden one’s prespective about life. It is as if you could see the world through someone else’s eyes.
to conclude, two of my goals in life are getting a phd in biology and travelling around the world. With the passion I have, and the effort and work I put into it, these two dreams, among my many other dreams will come true.
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What are your goals for the…
What are your goals for the future? This is an often-asked question and one I get frequently. The answer to this question will determine your short-term success as well as furthering your career. I have many goals for my future. I would like to own my own huff post business (like designing websites, apps or some kind of freelance business), to help people in need and make the world a better place.
One of my goals for the…
One of my goals for the future is to work on a novel that I have been working on for the past year. My goal this year was to publish an article in the magazine and I ran out of time. After publishing a few articles, now I am working on a novel. I am always striving to improve my gain followers for social media skills and knowledge, always learning new things and taking classes online, so I can become better at what I do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, in addition, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63440860215 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48625672222 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5526026942 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0588235294 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141805951324 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485676701068 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567263407188 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895404602332 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067114341 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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