A House is not merely a structure build of bricks and wood. It has more of an emotional value for people. In fact, the way we make and arrange our house to convert it into a home speaks a lot about our personality. A house is a place were take rest after all days work. It is a place were we unite with family, celebrate with friends and spend some of the most memorable moments of our life. For me house is a place which gives me relaxation and takes away all my stress. The most favorite niche in my house is the living room. I love to spend a lot of time in my living room, especially on the weekends.
The living room is my house is very large and the colors on the wall are bright. Not all the walls are painted with the same color. This breaks the monotony of the room and gives it a dynamic appearance. The seating arrangement, the cushions and the curtains compliment each other. Every piece of furniture in the living room gives it a meaningful lively appearance.
I live in a joint family. The living room is the places where all the family members come together to dine and spent time with each other. All the celebrations like birthdays and festival take place in the living room. We watch movie with the rest of the family in the large home theater that is installed in the living room
Me and my family have made several decisions of life after long hours of conversation in the living room. We have shared our moments of sorrow, joy, success and failure with my family members. There was one time when i was not doing very well academically. My family members always supported me and urged me to spend time with them in the living room, even though i wanted to stay alone. Soon the lively living room in my house removed brought me out of depression and i started viewing life with a better perceptive.
In conclusion,my living is the most vibrant area of the house. Although it might become noisy sometimes, but i still look forward to coming back to this place everyday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...out our personality. A house is a place were take rest after all days work. It is a ...
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Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ur personality. A house is a place were take rest after all days work. It is a place...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ving room, especially on the weekends. The living room is my house is very lar...
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...ves it a meaningful lively appearance. I live in a joint family. The ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...that is installed in the living room Me and my family have made several decis...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...family members. There was one time when i was not doing very well academically. M...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...th them in the living room, even though i wanted to stay alone. Soon the lively l...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...emoved brought me out of depression and i started viewing life with a better perc...
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Suggestion:
...ewing life with a better perceptive. In conclusion,my living is the most vibr...
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Suggestion: , my
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ok forward to coming back to this place everyday.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...o coming back to this place everyday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, well, after all, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41081081081 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37183374735 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475675675676 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3121385122 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9565217391 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0869565217 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82608695652 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167758676483 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602043669057 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504640187844 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104574208675 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373529736119 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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