There are many holidays in my country which are given to honour famous personalities. Gurunanak Jayanti, Gandhi Jayanti, Mahavir Jayanti are to name a few. The significance of these holidays are to pay homage to these great personalities who have carved the religious and political history of India. It is a way to thank these great people for their contributions. There are public Holidays are also for important events such as the Republic day and the independence day They are meant to commemorate these event and to remind us how our country attained independence and developed its own democratic and republic contribution.
The person that i would like to honor would be Mother Teresa. Mother Teresa was a one of the few renowned people who have been able to create an impact on the lives of common people in India. She is well know for her services towards the uplifting the poor and downtrodden in our country. She has won the noble prize for her tireless efforts and her undying attitude towards the weaker section of the society. At one time, India was divided by caste system and the people belonging to the lower castes were deprived of basic amenities of life like food and shelter. Mother Teresa helped them by lending her helping hand. She had developed many orphanages and other welfare centers for the much neglected class of the society.
The most remarkable achievement of Mother Teresa was her efforts towards saving the girl child and educating them. She developed a series of schools named by Sacred Heart for education of Girls. She made sure that the many orphan girls who were abandoned by there parents received tender loving care. There are many other things that she did for the welfare of the society. She can be considered an epitome of Altruism and personification of sacrifice. She is truly a holy spirit.
The life of Mother Teresa is an inspiration for many. she has been honored and awarded posthumously for her services. But i feel this is not enough. In my opinion her birthday should be celebrated as a sacred heart day. By doing so it we will remember her and try to emulate her goodness in our own life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, i feel, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79569892473 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61573367647 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543010752688 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4560877348 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5652173913 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1739130435 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.39130434783 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108282450363 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310067887458 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526457651614 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615348742355 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461159390323 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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