Living-rooms in my opinion are the most important rooms in the house. The superior reasons why I believe this way are that, I spend most of my time there, they are the biggest rooms in the house and at last, they are the place in which all the gatherings and the parties are held.
First I think that, a room in house in order to become the most important room in the house should be the one which I spend most of my time there. I like to study, work and watch TV in living-room because it is bigger than other rooms and I feel free to sit or lay down any where in there. Additionally, living-room has the best view in my whole house and I enjoy watching the sky during the day and the starts at night.
Furthermore, the living rooms are the biggest rooms in the house and has the greatest impact on the whole house's look. Decoration, light and the furniture of the living room are most significant factors in judging the character of the whole house. Personally saying, living-rooms have the predominant vibe in the house. Consequently, I pay close attention to the colors and the stuff I put there. For instance, I like my furniture to have lighter colors like white or light pink and the reason is that lighter colors always make people to feel relaxed, accommodates a peaceful atmosphere and gives the illusion that the living-room is bigger than what is really is. On the other hand, I hate colors like red or yellow to be used as the whole theme of the equipments in living room cause the color red psychologically makes people angry and yellow is frequently known for the depression color.
At last, the living rooms due to the fact that are the place in which most family gatherings and parties are held, play an indispensable role on illustration of the owner's taste in ornamentation. The first impression we make on peoples' minds are fundmental and immortal. Thus, the cloth and the shoes we choose to wear, the first makeup and the jewelry that we decide to put on and the place we meet have significant role on the future of the relationship we are founding. Therefor, if we are having a guest for the first time, that person is always going to remember how he/she felt the first time that walked into our house.
In conclusion, the living-rooms makes the true soul of the house and every single detail like house warming stuff, flowers and the colors of them are noticable and hard to miss.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, thus, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51029748284 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55789797137 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448512585812 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4647329593 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.1875 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3125 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2954355222 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118171762226 0.076458572812 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102379930963 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184865798213 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10599068248 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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