What do you think is the best way for your government to improve the environment?
Increase public transportation
Reduction of construction of new factories
build more parks
Over the past few decades in the name of modernization construction of industries are escalating and this has directly affected our environment to great erxtent. This is a serious issue that government must be concerned about. In the given scenario, it is said that in order to ameliorate the environment what should the governement do? Whether they should focus on more public vehicle or construction industries and factories should diminish or build more public park. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubetedly reducing construction works would aid in improving the environment rather than escalating transportaion or building parks. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, the first and foremost thing that needs to be done to improve environment is reduction of pollution. To be more precise, pollution are mostly generated from factories and indiustries. They produced harmful chemical to the environment contributing to it’s degradation. To cite an example, there are numerous manufacturing factories all ove the world and these are producing deletorious gases and chemicals to high extent. Nobody can estimate the repurcusions of these detrimental chemicals are affecting us and going to affect the generations to come. Therefore, once the government put effort on limitation of constucting new factories and industries then the ambience will begin to take a form.
Secondly, various raw materials are required to build equipment of new industries. Similary, these materials are procured from natural resources. For instance, to run a industry fuel is a fundamental factor and do we even know how much fuel and from where it is obtain ? The answer is simple these all required materials are attain from surrounding environment. Indeed, we do not even care how these activity of ours is hampering our environment. Nevertheless, now is the time we all inhabitants including the government of every state need to stand up to make visible improvemnet. Unquestionable, government should immediately search the altermnative of required raw material to run factory otherwise they must put restriction on construction.
All things considered, eventhough factories and industries are crucial for the development of world the ramifications of construction it are not welcoming. Hence, everyone on earth should be mindful about it and carry the activity accordingly.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'to its degradation'?
Suggestion: to its degradation
...hemical to the environment contributing to it’s degradation. To cite an example, there are numerous...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...natural resources. For instance, to run a industry fuel is a fundamental factor ...
^
Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or instance, to run a industry fuel is a fundamental factor and do we even know h...
^^
Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obtained'.
Suggestion: obtained
...know how much fuel and from where it is obtain ? The answer is simple these all requir...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'attained'.
Suggestion: attained
...simple these all required materials are attain from surrounding environment. Indeed, w...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 395, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'these activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; these activities
...onment. Indeed, we do not even care how these activity of ours is hampering our environment. N...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ld the ramifications of construction it are not welcoming. Hence, everyone on earth...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.0752688172 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49734042553 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26931228074 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56914893617 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7786579429 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262684685025 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662174022224 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572400498683 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142887001443 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861151528001 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'to its degradation'?
Suggestion: to its degradation
...hemical to the environment contributing to it’s degradation. To cite an example, there are numerous...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...natural resources. For instance, to run a industry fuel is a fundamental factor ...
^
Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or instance, to run a industry fuel is a fundamental factor and do we even know h...
^^
Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obtained'.
Suggestion: obtained
...know how much fuel and from where it is obtain ? The answer is simple these all requir...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'attained'.
Suggestion: attained
...simple these all required materials are attain from surrounding environment. Indeed, w...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 395, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'these activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; these activities
...onment. Indeed, we do not even care how these activity of ours is hampering our environment. N...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ld the ramifications of construction it are not welcoming. Hence, everyone on earth...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.0752688172 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49734042553 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26931228074 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56914893617 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7786579429 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9047619048 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262684685025 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662174022224 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572400498683 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142887001443 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861151528001 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.