Choosing a place to live is one of the important puzzeling decision that individauls have to take. Although some people prefer to choose a place with lextury style or a place located in the villeges, I prefer to choose my place according to location. The basis for my views is according to approximate location to the central areas, investment and health services.
Living near to the downtown has so many advatages. One of the most important benefits is saving time and money. For example, Given that I work in a campany located in Vancouver city, Canada, I could take up to 2 hours commuting if i live out side Vancouver city. I would stuck in the traffic every day on the highway. In addition, I would spend extra money on gas or transportation. However, choosing a location near to the downtown would save tremendous time and money.
In addition to the previous point, Investment is another crucial factor to choose a place according to the location. Given that homes and appartments located in the downtown prices increasing significantly, buying a place near to the downtown consider a secure investment. For instance,houses prices were, in average, 50000 dollar in downtown vancouver in 1999. Currently the average huse price is estimated to be 2 million dollars. People who bought there houses in the last decades made a furtien out of it.
More importantly, a place I choose should be located near to local hospital and public pharmacy. Since my parents are eldery, we frequently required an easy access to medical services. For example, last year my dad had an heart attack. Because our house located near to Vancouver General hospital, I was able to transfer him immidetly to the emmergancy room. Since every second count in the emergancy situation, I prefer to live in a place near to health services.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that, even though living in a lexury houses have some advantages like enjoing lexury life stile, living in a place near to the downtown have carry more advantages. living in Vancouver City have carry significant benefits like saving time and money, investment opportunity and easy access to medical services.
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Essay evaluation report
one of the important puzzeling decision
one of the important puzzeling decisions
homes and appartments located in the downtown prices increasing significantly,
Description: what is the subject for this sentence? can you re-write this sentence?
buying a place near to the downtown consider a secure investment.
buying a place near to the downtown is considered as a secure investment.
living in a lexury houses have some advantages
living in a lexury houses has some advantages
living in Vancouver City have carry significant benefits
living in Vancouver City has carried significant benefits
Sentence: Choosing a place to live is one of the important puzzeling decision that individauls have to take.
Error: puzzeling Suggestion: puzzling
Error: individauls Suggestion: individuals
Sentence: Although some people prefer to choose a place with lextury style or a place located in the villeges, I prefer to choose my place according to location.
Error: villeges Suggestion: villages
Error: lextury Suggestion: lecture
Sentence: Living near to the downtown has so many advatages.
Error: advatages Suggestion: advantages
Sentence: For example, Given that I work in a campany located in Vancouver city, Canada, I could take up to 2 hours commuting if i live out side Vancouver city.
Error: campany Suggestion: company
Sentence: Given that homes and appartments located in the downtown prices increasing significantly, buying a place near to the downtown consider a secure investment.
Error: appartments Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For instance,houses prices were, in average, 50000 dollar in downtown vancouver in 1999.
Error: vancouver Suggestion: uncover
Sentence: Currently the average huse price is estimated to be 2 million dollars.
Error: huse Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: People who bought there houses in the last decades made a furtien out of it.
Error: furtien Suggestion: further
Sentence: Since my parents are eldery, we frequently required an easy access to medical services.
Error: eldery Suggestion: elder
Sentence: Because our house located near to Vancouver General hospital, I was able to transfer him immidetly to the emmergancy room.
Error: immidetly Suggestion: imminently
Error: emmergancy Suggestion: emergency
Sentence: Since every second count in the emergancy situation, I prefer to live in a place near to health services.
Error: emergancy Suggestion: emergency
Sentence: As a conclusion, we can safely say that, even though living in a lexury houses have some advantages like enjoing lexury life stile, living in a place near to the downtown have carry more advantages. living in Vancouver City have carry significant benefits like saving time and money, investment opportunity and easy access to medical services.
Error: lexury Suggestion: luxury
Error: enjoing Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 365 350
No. of Characters: 1749 1500
No. of Different Words: 185 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.371 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.792 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.653 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.163 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.533 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I could take up to 2 hours commuting if i live out side Vancouver city. I would s...
^
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
... take up to 2 hours commuting if i live out side Vancouver city. I would stuck in the tr...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
...i live out side Vancouver city. I would stuck in the traffic every day on the highway...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , houses
...nsider a secure investment. For instance,houses prices were, in average, 50000 dollar i...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...e,houses prices were, in average, 50000 dollar in downtown vancouver in 1999. Currentl...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...ents are eldery, we frequently required an easy access to medical services. For example, last ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ices. For example, last year my dad had an heart attack. Because our house located...
^^
Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'carried'.
Suggestion: carried
...ng in a place near to the downtown have carry more advantages. living in Vancouver Ci...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
...he downtown have carry more advantages. living in Vancouver City have carry significan...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 230, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'carried'.
Suggestion: carried
...vantages. living in Vancouver City have carry significant benefits like saving time a...
^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280098280098 0.229887763892 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.149877149877 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0638820638821 0.0866891130778 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.027027027027 0.046263068375 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041769041769 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115479115479 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0540540540541 0.0351676179071 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81024888443 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0589680589681 0.0309702414327 190% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.004914004914 0.00188951952338 260% => OK
Determiners: 0.0958230958231 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014742014742 0.0209618222197 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.002457002457 0.0139019557991 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2166.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 364.0 408.028673835 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95054945055 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381868131868 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269230769231 0.251872472559 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203296703297 0.174417080927 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131868131868 0.112833075102 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81024888443 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508241758242 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 54.2789493469 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3333333333 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3609380822 48.84282405 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.644075263715 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.2564102564 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.05617977528 1.45489161554 141% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205402756876 0.300154397459 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103862670125 0.103427244359 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0764016324415 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516075746987 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137109670739 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850001958632 0.114077575197 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627346806197 0.0781384742642 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.321839891363 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.069746746943 0.067059652881 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144397544611 0.210909579961 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063579421735 0.0618886996521 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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