When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position
It is established beyond doubt that hardworking and trying to be superior plays a pivotal role in the individual’s successful and progress. One of the heated debates about this issue, however, is whether chance has a significant effect on success or people should try hard for progress. Accordingly, some argue that person’s successful comes from luck and fortune while others maintain that prosperity gains via hardworking and effort. Despite the diverse beliefs on this issue, I personally assert that prosperous people reach to their wishes and demands by attempting and trying hard in the ensuing paragraphs, I will delve into my most prominent reasons.
To begin with, one of the most prominent reasons for my perspective is that luck and fortune is a meaningless in my opinion. From the point view of science, there is not any logical definition for this term. Observations in one survey have been shown most of the people who thinks prosperity depends on luck, are not successful. In fact they are lazy. Also they cannot thrive, because they do not perform any job for their progress and just thinks that they are unlucky.
The second point to be addressed here is that no pain no gain. According to this idiom, individual should work hard and try a lot to reach their goals. Take my grandfather for example; he is one of the best authors by attempting. Since he advises me, by focusing on hardworking and always says his achievement depends on his efforts in youth.
To recap, the above-mentioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that if person tries hard to reach to demands and aims, he could be prosperous in his life. Hardworking to achieve the goals can provides us with the opportunity not also do not let to ourselves to be lazy but also assists to understand this point which prosperous people just can reach to their goals by hardworking.
- When people succeed it is because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with success Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 70
- When people succeed it is because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with success Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8927444795 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78792616778 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3906358831 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136546203422 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414203152635 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342614241528 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806636942889 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328196926888 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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