Our lives are connected to each other since the day we were born and from the first time we open our eyes we start to experience things, therefore, we learn everything from our own experiences. Of course, life is not full of joy thus, there would be different kinds of sour or sad moments or phases. In these periods, it would be better to hear another voice besides ours because, hearing some other experience about the situation we live might us feel more comfortable and calm or we could relate people easier.
Initially, our parents or siblings knows us the best since we grew up with them. They are the one who are always there for us and support us no matter what. Thus, they must be the one who we share our difficulties and hard times. They also lived our problems in past so they could show us a way out and tell their stories and teach us how to act in these kinds of situation. Furthermore, it would be simpler to share our problems since there is no boundries between us and we could feel more relaxed.
However, there are times that we cannot spend our times with our family so, we look for another familiar face to talk to. These people might be our friends, teachers or collages. Many people experienced similar or the same circumstances moreover, they could be lived the worse times than we can imagine. Therefore, it would be a better idea to open up to someone who can understand you more since they can make empathy far more better than anybody. Getting ideas or suggestions from these people might work for us and helps us to get through our problems.
Lastly, there are some problems or periods in our lives that caused by a travma or might cause a travma and these phases must be examined by a professional. Getting support from a professional fasten the recovery process and therapies makes us stronger, happier, calmer and helps to move on. If we wouldn't get the assistance we require, we might lose many things from our lives and ourselves for instance, our travma might result in a low self esteem, harder concentrating, less reliability or physical diseases/incapabilities. I am sure that everyone likes to solve their problems on their own but, we must remember that there are many professional and experienced people out there for everyone. To live a healthy, happy and peaceful life we shouldn't hesitate to apply for them.
In a nutshell, asking for advice to someone is not a weakness but a reliable way to solve our problems. I hope, all of us would be open minded about this context and remind everyone its significance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ou more since they can make empathy far more better than anybody. Getting ideas or suggesti...
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Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ier, calmer and helps to move on. If we wouldnt get the assistance we require, we might...
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Line 4, column 743, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...e a healthy, happy and peaceful life we shouldnt hesitate to apply for them. In a nuts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63436123348 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67691747544 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493392070485 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8865652399 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140710721825 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511740488996 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400208247423 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934233949803 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317223228392 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.