When you face difficult problems in life,what do you feel is the best way to solve them?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...blems in each stage of their life, which helps them to grow, learn and explore mo...
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...s them to grow, learn and explore more. therefore,when facing problems asking from experi...
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... grow, learn and explore more. therefore,when facing problems asking from experienced...
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...n less time and more Easliy. Firstly,Problems teach us the new things to explore and ...
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...hat problem in much less time.personally,when I got problems in my 9class,so, I asked...
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...class,so, I asked my best friend yonus. cause he was in the 10class,which he had expe...
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... going to experience and learn therefore,when I got my assignments My problems got st...
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...the first problem was writing an essay. which I was bad in it, first however I was th...
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...inking about how write and sat for like a hour then by seeing my problem my mom s...
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... ask from someone who has experienced it , though the only person that came to min...
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...wrote and explaining how to write, I got interest in writing ,therefore I liked t...
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...how to write, I got interest in writing ,therefore I liked to write 2 to 3 essays...
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... be meaningless by doing the same thing everyday and got nothing new wouldn't help ...
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...uldn't help us to achieve anything.I still remember that I was 14 years old ...
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...I still remember that I was 14 years old that my family planned a trip to Tashken...
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...ily planned a trip to Tashkent.therefore ,when we get there we didn't knew to...
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...which he knew Uzbeki and had experienced ,he helped us to get a room and thought u...
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... a room and thought us some Uzbeki words to communicate,and the new thing that he...
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...ght us some Uzbeki words to communicate,and the new thing that he thought us was ho...
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... without knowing their language.moreover,by typing in a calculator we can bargain w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67302452316 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0903501994 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528610354223 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.320747551 48.9658058833 419% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.375 100.406767564 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.875 20.6045352989 223% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.45110844103 225% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136308361005 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811244872404 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631636546446 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995862110693 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807024441671 0.0645574589148 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 11.7677419355 200% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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