Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Food is fuel which without it we cannot go anywhere and couldn’t do anything. Food stands or restaurants save our time by which in those time we can do our work or do any else. So, I would choose foods stands and will explain by the following reasons.
Firstly, Food stands are cheap and ready made which it can save our lots of time. I still remember that when I was working in company and my position was secretary manager and I should have been always with my boss and don’t had any time to cook and eat. Therefore, food stands and restaurants were my best friends. Cause they were cheap and so in time. And were so delicious that I always order and eat from there. And by that I could do my work and eat food to energise me.
Secondly, food stands are easy made. And whenever you want to eat and order something you would get it in few seconds. Back in time, that I was in my twelve grade and my friends come over and there was nobody cause my family went to my uncles house. By which I was alone and even didn’t knew how to cook. And everyone was so hungry and asked me to bring something. And I was shivering what to do. Therefore, I called my mother asked what to do and then she said relax I’ll do something. And by few minutes the door bill ringed and when I opened there were four pizzas. Which my mom ordered from the nearest restaurants.
In the conclusion, I would like to say that food stands and restaurants are a big nehmat for us. Which save our time and money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... when I opened there were four pizzas. Which my mom ordered from the nearest restaur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25174825175 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30745919569 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513986013986 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.383535304 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.8 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141090338852 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531487696977 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362033805402 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096620554868 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021988154245 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 86.8835125448 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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