Which do you prefer, an interesting and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun?
In today's economy, not everyboday has the luxury to be selective about their jobs. They often must take the one which is available. However if I had the chance to choose, I would like a more challenging and interesting job with less vacation.
First of all, if the job taken by me is interesting and exciting enough, it is more possible to succeed in this area or field. As we all know, people alway devote themsevles into his or her task and they are more passionate when working and communicating with their coworkers. Of course, people choosing the challenge job prove to be more creative and productive for a company. All these characteristics make contribution to the profit of company and the success of workers themselves. we can commonly be asked the typical question when interviewed, "do you like to deal with challenges and problems ?" or "are you ready for the challenging of this job?" It turns out the possive answer is prefered. Consequently these who passed the interview usually are soon promoted.
Second, less vacation does not means less fun and passion. Maybe you admire your friends deliver vacaton pictures during working outside on the facebook. you may never see they have take hours of train or plane which is not a comforble working condition. They probably have meals unregularly either eating too much or have to be hungury for a long time. Whereas, you can also find thing funny and novel things and people in your workplace or office. A relatively stable relationship between each college is either more friendly or efficient and productive. You can enjoy a trip on weekend on suburban, in a park or somewhere else, instead of taking a job on vaction.
The job with more vacation but less fun, addimitedlly are more attracting for some people, especially for those who are young, naive and less experienced. They just want to see more people more cities on vacation. But I'm afraid they passion would fade off because of their boring work, which cost most of their daytime or life. Finally their would find the true and biggest happyness is from work other than anything else. Therefore, I prefer the challenging one, though less vacation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'of course', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192682926829 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.146341463415 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10243902439 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.090243902439 0.046263068375 195% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0731707317073 0.0685040099705 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0951219512195 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0317073170732 0.0351676179071 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67377293155 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.019512195122 0.0309702414327 63% => OK
Particles: 0.00487804878049 0.00188951952338 258% => OK
Determiners: 0.0756097560976 0.0887237588012 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.019512195122 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0170731707317 0.0139019557991 123% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2192.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 371.0 408.028673835 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90835579515 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318059299191 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247978436658 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164420485175 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11590296496 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67377293155 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590296495957 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 69.3160128237 59.2087087015 117% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1304347826 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5409107244 48.84282405 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3043478261 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1304347826 20.5533526081 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608695652174 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.54480286738 198% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.9282784484 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.03149606299 1.45489161554 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359648905193 0.300154397459 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0754715644101 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0701333353743 0.0752933317313 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.418198918811 0.497263757937 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0964986947985 0.151897553556 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111695591381 0.114077575197 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105892804151 0.0781384742642 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279096188441 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0401856669932 0.067059652881 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24367641351 0.210909579961 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574666225648 0.0618886996521 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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