Which of the following activities do you think will be the most beneficial to the environment? (1) Commute by biking or walking (2) Recycling (3) Eating a vegan diet
There are a plethora of activities which benefit the environment in many different ways. In my opinion, commute by biking or walking is an activity which is most beneficial to the environment. However , some may argue that commute by biking or walking is not beneficial whatsoever, but I disagree for the following three reasons.
First of all, in a situation where the commute distance is low and can be covered via walking or through biking it is always a better option to go with the choice of riding a bike or taking a walk. As in the early morning the human body is lethargic and is not energetic which leads to them not working to their maximum potential, by taking a walk or a biking to work would lead to them having more blood being pumped in the body and get rid of the lethargy that often accompanies human bodies in the mornings.
Second of all, a commute by bike or walking could lead to a drop the carbon emission of an area or a city since the people of that certain area are now using a source of energy which is not harmful to the environment and there is no sound or noise polluting the streets anymore which leads to a better street environment. This drop in carbon emission is significantly beneficial to the environment as it leads to less air pollution from the vehicles used for commute by the people.
Finally, nowadays people are often stuck to their screens especially the younger generations and the time they put into their physical health has dropped drastically which is a concern to be noted. If these generation of people habituate the commute by biking or walking they do not have to keep tabs on their physical health as commuting in this manner would lead to an amazing amount of exercise which is enough to maintain a persons physical health as they have do the biking or walking from and to home.
In conclusion, commute by biking or walking is the most beneficial to the environment as it leads to a better lifestyle, makes you more energetic in the mornings and maintains your physical health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...vities which benefit the environment in many different ways. In my opinion, commute by biking ...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t beneficial to the environment. However , some may argue that commute by biking o...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
.... First of all, in a situation where the commute distance is low and can be covered via ...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...dies in the mornings. Second of all, a commute by bike or walking could lead to a drop...
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Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this generation' or 'these generations'?
Suggestion: this generation; these generations
...ally which is a concern to be noted. If these generation of people habituate the commute by biki...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...If these generation of people habituate the commute by biking or walking they do not have t...
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Line 7, column 427, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...of exercise which is enough to maintain a persons physical health as they have do the bik...
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Line 7, column 466, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... a persons physical health as they have do the biking or walking from and to home....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61538461538 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62129506926 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467032967033 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.723252505 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.0 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 20.6045352989 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338435452121 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158346477253 0.076458572812 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797982096004 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208182745482 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864877665863 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...vities which benefit the environment in many different ways. In my opinion, commute by biking ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t beneficial to the environment. However , some may argue that commute by biking o...
^^
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
.... First of all, in a situation where the commute distance is low and can be covered via ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...dies in the mornings. Second of all, a commute by bike or walking could lead to a drop...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this generation' or 'these generations'?
Suggestion: this generation; these generations
...ally which is a concern to be noted. If these generation of people habituate the commute by biki...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...If these generation of people habituate the commute by biking or walking they do not have t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 427, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...of exercise which is enough to maintain a persons physical health as they have do the bik...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 466, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
... a persons physical health as they have do the biking or walking from and to home....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61538461538 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62129506926 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467032967033 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.723252505 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.0 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 20.6045352989 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338435452121 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158346477253 0.076458572812 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797982096004 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208182745482 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864877665863 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 11.7677419355 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.