Which of the following activities do you think will be the most beneficial to the environment? (1) Commute by biking or walking (2) Recycling (3) Eating a vegan diet
There are a plethora of activities that benefit the environment in many different ways. In my opinion, commuting by biking or walking is an activity which is most beneficial to the environment. However, some may argue that commute by biking or walking is not beneficial whatsoever, but I disagree for the following three reasons.
First of all, in a situation where the commute distance is low and can be covered via walking or biking, it is always a better option to go with the choice of riding a bike or taking a walk. In the early morning, the human body is lethargic and is not energetic which leads to them not working to their maximum potential, by taking a walk or biking to work would lead to them having more blood being pumped into the body and get rid of the lethargy that often accompanies human bodies in the mornings.
Second of all, a commute by bike or walking could lead to a drop in the carbon emission of an area or a city since the people of that certain area are now using a source of energy which is not harmful to the environment and no sound or noise is polluting the streets anymore which leads to a better street environment. This drop in carbon emission is significantly beneficial to the environment as it leads to less air pollution from the vehicles used for commute by people.
Finally, nowadays people are often stuck to their screens especially the younger generations, and the time they put into their physical health has dropped drastically which is a concern to be noted. If these generations of people habituate the commute by biking or walking they do not have to keep tabs on their physical health as commuting in this manner would lead to an amazing amount of exercise which is enough to maintain a person's physical health as they have done the biking or walking from and to home.
In conclusion, commuting by biking or walking is the most beneficial to the environment as it leads to a better lifestyle, makes you more energetic in the mornings, and maintains your physical health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63333333333 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65495111671 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6737411902 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.8 100.406767564 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.6045352989 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323695918859 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149631924335 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815990747069 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199962417111 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843298441666 0.0645574589148 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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