Which of the following choices do you think has the greatest impact on environmental protection?
A. governmental regulations
B. environmental awareness groups
C. individual effort
There are a lot of things that can influence ecological guarding, such as laws from executive and legislative branches, groups of people who care about our environmental and personal impact. I do not wish to underestimate the importance of groups and private effort to this issue. However, I am confident that government regulations could provide the most beneficial effect on environmental protection because this tool is the most powerful, valuable, and rapid.
Clearly, the government could accelerate the process of Earth’s protection by special national laws and international rules. Why will the administration do it? The answer is plain to see: it is beneficial for the economy, and environmental protection is the most popular topic all over the world for the election. A striking example is the recent decision of the United States president, Joe Biden, where he decided to upgrade more than 600,000 government vehicles to electric cars. No doubt, this decision will have a far-reaching implication for nature protection and people understanding how we should think about our Earth.
Moreover, the government is not only a federal administration but also a local government. For instance, the state of California and the state of Washington in 2020 sanctioned that these states would ban the selling of all cars that use oil and gas as fuel since 2030. In fact, these states provided society with a lot of benefits whether people buy electric cars or install solar roofs, such as tax benefits and other features. Indeed, this decision is an excellent example of how local governments could protect our green world.
In contrast, the government is able to provide us with a substantial negative effect on environmental protection and the eco-friendly population. While the government of Russia and China signed the Paris Climate change agreement, the former president of the US, Donald Trump, decided to leave this essential agreement. Apparently, government regulation could be a significant influencer on the environment not only in a positive attitude but also with the negative impact.
In the final analysis, it appears that government regulations are the most powerful tool that can impact environmental protection. So, we could find many advantages of this tool, such as providing support of legislative and executive power, motivating people to use green energy, and staying at the important multinational climate agreements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rtant multinational climate agreements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in contrast, in fact, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.0752688172 334% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39686684073 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09861945189 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553524804178 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8295083092 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.588235294 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168650750811 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588720759112 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502638274283 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987504059693 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060030212315 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.