Some people argue children should stay in school until the age of 18 while others think that 14 years is long enough. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that it would be better for young ones to continue school education before they turn eighteen years old, whilst others disagree and support the idea that they should finish it as early as fourteen. This essay agrees that earlier school graduation is beneficial to students.
Spending four extra years at school is claimed to be useless and even harmful for children’s future development. Particularly, routine and absence of any stress hinders their progress. Despite this, early independence can still be advantageous both for a young person and the community. Teenagers facing the first significant decision of considering further education understand that they may not have a knack for science or humanities, so they can make up their mind to switch to a simple job. For instance, Australian officials report that a mediocre student can end up becoming a reputed plumber and contribute to a community more that he or she would if forced to continue studying.
However, many disagree and feel that the longer the children stay at school, the more likely that they will maintain their focus on classes owing to the effect of comfortable and familiar environment. Moreover, learners can use their accumulated knowledge and social ties in order to prepare better for their finals. It is therefore agreed that relaxed atmosphere and habitual surroundings bring about self-confidence for those of school age. In other words, before entering the university, a school graduate could boost his or her academic experience without being distracted by external opinions regarding his or her image.
In conclusion, while the benefits of delaying graduation from school that allows children to keep mental health and gradually move to a college or university, some still feel that learners should be more proactive and take ownership for their future earlier than at the age of eighteen. However, as long as we carefully consider the decision to graduate earlier could be more beneficial .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 387, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...raduate earlier could be more beneficial .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28213166144 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82026532163 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601880877743 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2054241437 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.615384615 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141129829227 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477079045394 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411283351883 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921966725542 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293666123214 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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