Which one is better growing up in a big city or in a countryside?
Which one is better growing up in a big city or in a countryside? It is difficult to definitely answer this question. There are a lot of people who prefer countryside for their children to be grown up since a healthy environment guarantees children’s health. On the other hand, a large number of families suffer many difficulties only to live in a big city because they think living in a big city benefits their children to have a prosperous future. I strongly oppose the idea of raising children in countryside rather than a big city. I hold this idea because living in a big city offers various recreational and educational facilities. Also, living in a big city makes children well-matured for their future lives.
The first and foremost reason that I prefer a big city for my children is that real joy can be only found in big cities. There are a variety of recreational places, amusement parks, theaters and cinemas in big cities that families are able to spend some time there to get refresh their minds after a busy day they had. In other words, the children always have many options of how they want to spend their leisure time. If they are bored of sitting on their chairs at school, there are different play grounds to run, jump and play with their friends. Although some people may say that living in countryside provides wild nature for children to enjoy whole-day long, I believe that being in the same environment would become repetitive one day. Nowadays, children are looking forward to variability, so why do we suppress them by living in a limited atmosphere?
Further, various educational facilities is another reason that I choose a big city for children. No doubt how fast different technologies come to enhance education conditions and the big cities are the first places suitable for such an investment. This is why we are now witnessed by different kinds of institutions and schools, each of them offers you a novel means of teaching. For example, if your child is more interested in art, many schools are there where your child is able to better demonstrate her talent. If your child is more talented in sciences, there are many institutes that prepare your child for national and international tests. Unfortunately, because of their lower populations, villages are less acceptable for such investments.
Finally, as the children are grown up in a big and modern environment, they acquire living skills better than by living in a limited environment. For instance, they constantly greet with a wide variety of people as they go out in different public places such as on the bus, subways and at the park. As a consequence, they learn how to behave with different personalities. Being as child grown up in a country side, I always had a trouble with easily trusting people when I attended the university in a big city. While my friends who came from big cities did not have the same problem. Moreover, when children live and grow up in a complicated society such as a big city, they learn how to solve their problems in their future social and professional life.
Over all, taking into account all these factor, I strongly disagree with the idea of raising children in countryside rather than a big city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ell-matured for their future lives. The first and foremost reason that I pre...
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...ss acceptable for such investments. Finally, as the children are grown up in...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224755700326 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.14332247557 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117263843648 0.0866891130778 135% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456026058632 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0651465798046 0.0685040099705 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141693811075 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0309446254072 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79717586608 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0228013029316 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.00977198697068 0.00188951952338 517% => OK
Determiners: 0.0830618892508 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00488599348534 0.0209618222197 23% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0179153094463 0.0139019557991 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3274.0 2387.08602151 137% => OK
No of words: 557.0 408.028673835 137% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87791741472 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330341113106 0.338922669872 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240574506284 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168761220826 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10592459605 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79717586608 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473967684022 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.6438283387 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4230769231 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.203176571 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.923076923 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4230769231 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 45.4805275514 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.5641025641 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374166432262 0.300154397459 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107937448948 0.103427244359 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.104719506601 0.0752933317313 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484169299014 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157194491335 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14594383397 0.114077575197 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187411991597 0.0781384742642 240% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.302886734755 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.111395216294 0.067059652881 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242338833361 0.210909579961 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128628051677 0.0618886996521 208% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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