Which one do you prefer:
1) a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting project but less
vacation days or
2) another company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but
more vacation days.
By and large, as the time went by, some has called into question whether we have to consider our passion and challenges of a vocation or having a plenty of free time is of importance more and more in coma ration with other aspects. There has been no shortages of debates among scholars that if we have not more free time of work, standards of lives will diminish sharply and we will not take privileges. As for this writer’s opinion, I will subscribe to the latter ideas. In what follows, I will delve into the most excellent reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
To being with, it goes without saying that there are a wide range of underlying reasons why had better we consider more about interacting jobs or those challenges us. First thing now looping up in my head is that not only do these kind of duties soar our incentives, but also we could acquire well-rounded things from new challenge. In fact, those have been given younger generations a hand to prepare themselves to stand in front of difficulties. While by contact, neither unsophisticated jobs nor perks stemming from those jobs, like a lot of vacation with paid holiday fail to help us so as to possess foresight or inhabit us to take steps wrong. What I am trying to say is that we would gain a head deal of rewarding experience from challenging works, which have ups and downs.
Another thing ought to bear in mind is that statistical research have been revealed that should we do our job at heart, we will face up to happiness and fulfillment during our lifelong. Simply put, not matter whether a plethora free time of the work are had or not, when works are being did with willingness that person without no shadow of doubt inducing his or her moment very well. In the light that he or she always has had a wish to that particular vocation without wasting time. Let clarified with personal experience, I cannot remember vividly but if my serves me right it as many yeas ago when I used to make up my mind to head for the sake of job-seeking. To cut a long story short, it is crystal clear I was entail to work up to my ears from sun rise to down but I did not feel like I am tried or this is humdrum profession. In fact, had I not lunched that work, I would have not felt that my life is precious or I am doing meaningful work; however, I had not merits, like more vacation.
To sum up , considering the point above mentioned , the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that; I have deeply held belief; albeit, this issue relieve upon we speak about what character and what preference they have. Having this outlook foster quality of life regardless whether free time of the work is provided or not, which is meaningless.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ation or having a plenty of free time is of importance more and more in coma rati...
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...t if we have not more free time of work, standards of lives will diminish sharply...
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... to substantiate my viewpoint. To being with, it goes without saying that there...
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...ide range of underlying reasons why had better we consider more about interacting jobs...
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...oping up in my head is that not only do these kind of duties soar our incentives, but also...
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...nor perks stemming from those jobs, like a lot of vacation with paid holiday fail...
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...ation with paid holiday fail to help us so as to possess foresight or inhabit us to take...
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...always has had a wish to that particular vocation without wasting time. Let clari...
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... , considering the point above mentioned , the most rational conclusion to be draw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, while, another thing, as for, as to, in fact, kind of, by and large, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49898580122 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57746111224 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4573587543 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.470588235 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.6045352989 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809697490873 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0269805382823 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293649803906 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493533061679 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323146720045 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.