Nowadays, people all want to have a successful life in college. As far as I am concerned, tutors in university are the most essential factor for a student to success collage, and my reasons are as follows.
First and foremost, having a successful life in college means one can always get good grades, and tutors offer a student a solid academic help, which helps a student secure high scores. For example, in my university, there is a tutor center where all students can apply for an academic tutor to help them with their study. I applied a Statistic tutor once, and she assisted me to understand difficult math concepts. Consequently, I got straight A in my Statistic class.
In addition, to success university, one has to be sure about their future, and tutors in college are able to provide useful advice for students. That is to say, most of tutors in college are in their third or senior year, and they can provide many experiences or talk about some difficulties they used to have for freshmen. For instance, I was very confused about the major I was going to chose when I was in fresh year. It is my English tutor who helped me to sort out what I was really passionate about. Eventually, I chose to study English literature, and till today, I feel this is the most correct choice I have ever had in my life, and it all thanks to my English tutor.
Last but not least, success in college refers to having a good relationship with others, and tutors always can give students helpful advice to get along with other students. To further elaborate, when students make many friends, they will feel enjoyable and satisfied with their life, and a happy life indeed equals to successful life in college. For example, in my country, every student in college will be distributed with a mentor who helps them with some life and interpersonal issues. When someone finds he has not idea how to make friends, he can always ask mentors for some advice. I was shy when first entering the university, and my mentor suggested me to join some school clubs to make friends. I ended up becoming the leader of student council and had a lot of friends and wonderful life in university.
In conclusion, some people might think family, friends or high quality education in high school are the most essential factors for a student to success college; however, students should have good grades, knowing of their future and good relationship with others so as to success college, and only tutors in university are able to help students with above elements of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the tutors') or simply say ''most tutors''.
Suggestion: most of the tutors; most tutors
...ul advice for students. That is to say, most of tutors in college are in their third or senior...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...confused about the major I was going to chose when I was in fresh year. It is my Engl...
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Line 5, column 678, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and it all thanks to my English tutor. Last but not least, success in college r...
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Line 10, column 263, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...uture and good relationship with others so as to success college, and only tutors in uni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, really, so, third, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72098214286 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59036211463 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.86738351254 589% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1333699418 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298679153717 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966596864678 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921103731853 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201517898707 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704798725771 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.