which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child?why?
1-being helpful to others
2-being honest
3-being well-organized
Everyone in consideration to his private view point can choose one of these points; however, I am inclined to declare that being honest is the most vital factor in forming children's character. I feel this way for some reasons, which I explore them in following essay to empower my vantage point:
To begin with, nobody could overlook this fact that not only harm himself, but also he can affect his future negatively. For instance take a child who plays computer game frequently and then he claims about improving lessons in the school. It should be said that his parents believe him and in the end of semester, his grades make them surprised. If the young is instructed to be frank in any circumstance, gradually they will perceive that honesty can assist them to optimize their personality in the best way.
The second reason for my selection lies in the reality that a child with a sense of honest is able to create a great communication in the school. It goes without saying that honesty and humility are the bedrock of a friendship. Relying on each other in a friendly relationship will cause friends to talk about the secrets, study habits, family troubles, and private relationship and so on with each other. One should not forget that liar beings have solitary personality and meanwhile they can suffer from depression even worse the thoughts of suicide. Briefly, for improving interpersonal skills in children are required to families share their experience in this issue with their children.
Moreover, being frank can cover two other mentioned points in question. Such a perfect personality attempts to make its parents and society satisfied. For preventing from telling lie, an honest youth plans an appropriate schedule to arrange and do all their tasks on time. Needless to say that with having extra time, a honest and reliable person can be helpful to others unlike a liar human who tries to escape from society with any pretext.
To sum up, the following conclusion could be drawn that a strong character would become a prosperous person in future as long as he knows about the rules of honesty. Not only can this feature leads him to disciplined character, but also when people ask him for helping, he will accept their request enthusiastically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, thus, while, for instance, i feel, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94778067885 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68456071401 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592689295039 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6532843093 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.4375 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198377353483 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612928891213 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486500675838 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109710672053 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222799621166 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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