which one is the most important factor for a student to success at college or university?
1. Tutor in university
2. the encouragement from family and friend
3. high quality education from high school
It is establish beyond doubt that people for being successful in the success path needs someone's help. So, it comes from wisdom to ask someone getting help. While some people believe that the encouragement of family and friends is essential or it is a rudimentary factor to have a high quality education from high school, I subscribe to the view that Tutor is above all among all paramount factors. My ensuing paragraphs aim to elaborate on the reasons.
For the first and the most paramount reason, tutor in university is the one knowlagable person student can trust. In the science complex path, university-goers need a torch to turn light on thier road. Someone has enough knowlege to tell them what is the true path, what should they do, and what are their flaws. To clarify, it takes a long span of time that a freshman student at the university distinguish how he should study, what material are suficient and what is the best way of studing in order to gaining knowladge. My personal experienc is a compelling example of this. When I was accepted to the university, I had not any experiences about the right materials for studing and the style of studing well. I used to do this as I did before in high school. It leads me to merely read some book as a machine without any creativity related to my major. I was Architecture student and it was crucial for me to be creative, while I was tring read book, hence my lecture told me the exact way of studing in architecture is trying to draw what you saw in the book. After a while I could become a well-drawer as I supposed to be. Had not had a good tutor, I could not be one of the best drawer in my university.
Second noteworthy factor to mention is that a university professor passed the same path to be a successful person, so he has enough experienc to share with his student to ensue. It is safe to say that whenever someone passed a way, he can distinguish the right and the false way. Therefore, he can give the true experienc to others. To put this in a vivid picture, I had a project over my bachelor's degree to be done, it was really hard for me to do that. Some especial software needed to use in order to draw my design. no one knows about the trendy modern software and I was stuck in a vague circumstance. My friend, my family, also my classmate did not know anything about. at the end of the semeter, I called my professor to give a hand, consequently, he stated what should I do to do my best. I passed that course very well, ultimately.
To sum up, for being successful in the education path, it is the best way to have a tutor in university, not only owing to the fact that he or she is knowledgable, but also he passed the same path and has enough experienc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: established
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: No
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Suggestion: At
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, i suppose, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 509.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38703339882 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65936470926 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475442043222 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 720.9 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9199447514 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.32 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.36 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187776891085 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483695291729 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687959967926 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129731188554 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868787770836 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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