Which of these forms of protest make the most impact:
• Going on strike
• Participating in marches
• Disseminating information through social media
Recently in Chile there have been protests, due to the injustices and inequalities that exist. Although there are different ways of expressing dissatisfaction with this. In my opinion, participating in marches is more influential and important. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, in a march there are many people with the same discontent and objective in common. Families have been seen in marches, even with children and grandparents, with the goal of changing the future for them. This will help children and the next generation to know that we must fight for what is fair. My own experience is a compelling example of this. My grandfather receives a pension of 100,000 Chilean pesos who is the reason why my brothers and I went to the marches. As the days went by, my parents, my little cousins and almost all my family became aware of the inequality and injustice that exists in Chile, such that now there are more than 10 of us who go to the marches, including my grandfather. For this reason, I strongly believe that participating in marches with children has and will have a great influence in all areas.
Secondly, the marches cause people to be more active in political things, investigate and inform themselves of what is happening and why. Although mass marches do not always get results immediately, they capture the attention of citizens and even cause an impact abroad, consequently people are more aware and have an opinion about it. For instance, what is happening in Chile has led thousands and millions of Chileans to go out to the streets generating more and more people to be informed of all the inequalities and injustices that exist in Chile and join this movement. The vast majority of my family was locked in this bubble, assuming that they will have a bad pension and their children will be in debt from the university, but the marches have caused people to wake up and fight for this inequality. Accordingly, I think the marches have an impact on citizens, since it causes them to take a stand against what is happening.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that participating in marches is one of the most significant and important ways to protest. This is because the marches are important, that it can be demonstrated to people, new generations and other countries, that we must fight for a fair country for all people, so that countries that are suffering the same, can take the example of countries that went out to fight, and have a fairer country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...injustices and inequalities that exist. Although there are different ways of expressing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81136363636 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79114505221 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484090909091 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8230195842 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.611111111 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103465575838 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407813736967 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457559155904 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693487811939 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204349501223 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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