The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world?
now in these world information is considered a real wealth. in addition to that , internet provide ton of information to people at very low cost and immediatly. The availibility of information make people problems easy to solve. thus above prompt says , the widespread use of internet has given people access to information on a level never exeperienced before which is true. incresed availibility of information has sveral influence on people's life .
Firstly, the incresed avalibilty of information makes positive impact on thier work . now people easily work with the help of these information and make thier work more efficient. now a days people get information of any kind of stream as they want with help of internet. i remember when i am a teenager my sister used learn cooking but she not got that learning very well by books . so she decide to learn food recipees from internet and what surprisingly she learned these all as she always wanted to. as like my sister many people get what they want because of incresaed avalibility of information.
secondly, the increased avalibility of information also makes some bad impact on student because the the easy avalibility of information student totaly rely on the internet which makes them internet addict. they always try to solve or simplify a problems with these information based on internet makes them less active in school. as wellas they stop reading books. the increased avalibility makes people lazy as also.which makes them less productive. like as in developed the ratio of buying books dropped from when the internet provide more information
for last, the incresed avalibility of information help underdeveloped country to progress with providing information of new teqhnologies,ideas,eqipment. these country now get that information easily and learn from them. now internet help people to learn and provide information as they want to master or already masterd.the internet made our life uncomparable with previous ones
to conclude, internet influence people life so much and thier are some advantages and disadvantages also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31231231231 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16905339309 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1682281871 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2777777778 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.5376344086 758% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34178187425 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126981822746 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100350508491 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217176619269 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140958236377 0.0645574589148 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.