The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world?
Nowadays, people in all over the world have a comfort access to internet which has a considerable effect on their life. What matters here is the how this easy access to such a large source of information affects human life. I believe that internet, the invaluable data source, has revolutionized the everyone’s life appearance in three main areas these days: the pace of life, communication, and education.
To begin with, consider the pace of life in these days; people have to work more and more to keep up with this unprecedented developing world. For example people compelled to work more hours in a day and have less off-days in month to gain their necessary income to have a good life. And internet access is one of the keystone elements that brought about this extent of developing in world. With global and easy access to the internet buisinesses could contrive new ways to develop and progressing rate among them increased magnificently so that people had to adapt themselves to this crazy rate of progressing.
Moreover, communication, which is a prominent aspect of human life, has been experiencing a breakthrough by means of internet. For example, people have a easy access to social networks, communication applications and softwares, by means of which they can communicate with anyone in anyplace all over the world instantly, that required a considerable amount of time and money in the past. So with this amazing tool of communication long distances mean nothing.
Last but not least, this priceless volume of information has totally changed the education in human’s life. With this astounding facility of information we do not need that heavy and expensive hard copy of books and also that large, spacious libraries. Nowadays, we can easily use e-books and search for our necessary information in the internet.
Taken all this into account, I believe that internet has completely altered our life. People life is in a great speed and they should strive to keep up with it, they can easily communicate with anyone they want every corner of this world, and also they can have access to magnificent library of books through internet, and all these are consequences of emerging internet in our lives. Who can imagine this world without internet anymore?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...ect on their life. What matters here is the how this easy access to such a large source...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s of internet. For example, people have a easy access to social networks, communi...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...s of internet. For example, people have a easy access to social networks, communication appli...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ances mean nothing. Last but not least, this priceless volume of information has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06914893617 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90411405626 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505319148936 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9547370835 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294463267742 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110685982816 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441329944143 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174989773138 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535021398209 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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