Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, workers' efficiency is important and employers use many different types of methods for improving their employee's performances.And, workers' satisfaction is a necessary, for their productivity they used on different tasks during work hours by their bosses.
First of all, I think stable job and working at the same type of job is very boring, and that decreases workers' performances.And, their managers always consider preventing their going back.Because of their workers' positive production performances they diversify employee's job titles.And, that approach increase their effectivity enoughly.
Also, in some factories especially great ones, one job to one worker methods.Because, they have enough budget and money for giving salary.And, they think that is the best way than one worker to more than one job approach.Because, different jobs may impact company members concentration.The second approach which is one worker to more work is considered poor companies and countries.
In addition, different works improve members working abilities and they give them more experiences which about their job environments.And, the most parts of these workers have much more knowledges, and they achieve various things where they work.Almost all of them gain more than one title.
Furthermore, money is the greatest substance which given by company owners to workers. The most parts of people want to earn a lot of money, for their reaching more salary they would like to work alot.For that, they want to diversify their skills.The worker who have different abilities is the option for their bosses, because when they need new worker they think their employee first.And, these worker have many advantages than other people.
In conclusion, taking account of all above's reasons, I definitely agree that statement which workers more satisfied when they have different tasks on their working time and spaces.So, all factories should think that method for their areas where their workers work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59539473684 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01298371997 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532894736842 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.1344086022 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.7332938466 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 243.0 100.406767564 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.4285714286 20.6045352989 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 5.45110844103 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255097500142 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140078448287 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742931270173 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161282064065 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499207964183 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 11.7677419355 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 58.1214874552 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.1575268817 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 10.9000537634 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.0537634409 191% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.