Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.

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Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.

Although some of the workers love to make a one type of the work during a day, other want to do different sort of the tasks. Through those opposite ideas I think that working on one type of task during a day is better for the worker. I want to reinforce my opinion from the following aspects.

First, preparing everything before doing it takes so much time, so doing different kinds of the task means that lots of waste time. doing everything need some sort of facilities to do a task easily and in shorter time. For example, the things we need to bake a cake is different than cooking fish and it took sometimes to prepare them based on the recipe. In other word, if you want to do different tasks most of your day times waste on the preparing the basics to begin. On the other hand, it took some time to concentrate to the new task after a left other. For example, when I play piano, I need to concentrate to the song and gets its feeling before I began. In most of the times when I want to rehears different sort of sing with different feeling, I need time gap between by playing to able myself to concentrate on the song feeling.

The latter reason why I kept that view point is that by doing same thing during a day enable you to do it unless thinking about it. Besides I think that you never can do your best when you first want to start anything. Take typing for example, when you first begin to typing you are so slow, but after some hours you can do it so fast because you remember the place of the most keys and you enable to type unless thinking about the word places.

The last but not the least, by doing same task on one day, I think that workers can get valuable experience and practice on it to keep it on their intrinsic. Take myself for example, I love painting, for example when I start to paint tree shadow on the painting, I recognize that if I use some sort of colors my painting shadow unless being so effective were looks so natural. Therefore, I need all the left time of the day to practice this new task and it is not achievable if I do various kinds of the work.

In a nutshell, everyone has their own working habit and by following those habits could do the things in the best way. However, I think that doing a same task during a day is better for the workers based on the reasons I mentioned above.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
Although some of the workers love to make a one type of the ...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Doing
...the task means that lots of waste time. doing everything need some sort of facilities...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ngs we need to bake a cake is different than cooking fish and it took sometimes to p...
^^^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'took'.
Suggestion: sometimes took
...e is different than cooking fish and it took sometimes to prepare them based on the recipe. In...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'rehear'.
Suggestion: rehear
...an. In most of the times when I want to rehears different sort of sing with different f...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
... you to do it unless thinking about it. Besides I think that you never can do your best...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, i think, in short, sort of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23214285714 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23481536441 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417410714286 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3747245885 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300235499517 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114338364521 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632633818306 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181827964689 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241254042322 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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